考研英语作文范文批改(80)

　　Im writing to apply for the position of Industrial Designer which you advertised in newspapers.

　　Therere a number of reasons which I can qualify for this job. The first and foremost(因为信件本身比较简洁，不要用很多的连词), I major in Design in University(没有说是具体的哪一所大学，不用大写首字母), and I can work in it faster than others(最好不要这样和别人进行比较，另外你不知道别的应聘者的水平). Second, I have some years of work experience about this job. At last, I not only have the capacity of the social contact, but also have the enthusiasm about this position.

　　I would appreciate it if you would send me a reply at your earliest convenience.