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　　I am a graduation(graduate) of Changde university(u大写). I am writing for apply for the position of management in designing software. I am so excited when I saw the advertised in(用介词on) the Internet.

　　My main courses include Computer and Business Management in the university. I worked in Changde computer limited liability computer(这里是个公司吗?) as the secretary to manager of designing. I am familarity(拼写错误) with Microsoft Word and Excel.

　　I have a strong professinal(拼写错误) spirit and cheeful(拼写错误) personality. Ability to work independently and outstanding organizational skills are my strenghs(拼写错误). Thank you for your time and consideration. Looking forward to your reply.