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考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改32

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　　I am a senior student from the Department of Chinese language and literature of Lanzhou University. I am writting the letter in purpose of applying for your recently advertised post for a staff member.

　　Yours sincerely

　　LI Ming

　　考研英语作文批改点评如下：

　　Dear sir or madom(madam拼写错误，用大写Sir or Madam), I am a senior student from the Department of Chinese language and literature of Lanzhou University. I am writting(拼写错误 the letter in purpose of applying for your recently advertised post for a staff member. I am sure that I am qualified. Firstly, my cheerful personality is well suited to working as a staff member. Secendly(拼写错误), I has cultivated strong ability of teamwork in school .I know whatever difficulty or situation we are confronted with, those who have the spirit of cooperation and teamwork are nearer to success. Thirdly, enclosed with this letter is my resume, which further details my previous academic qualifications and work experience. Finally, I would appreciate it if you could grant me an interview so that I could explain in more details in person the relevance of my educational background, hobbies and working experiences Yours sincerely(加逗号) LI Ming 点评：6分建议在第一段写明你申请的职位，从而让第二段的几条信息更有针对性。结尾处还应该有等待您的回复之类的一句话。So that后的可以去掉。

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