考研英语待批改作文:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am very glad to meet the news that your company is seeking employees about computer technology from news paper recently.It is a very good opportunity to me.
First of all,I have done experiment of the computer technology for five years,and Many practices help me to become a better worker.Secondly,I have not only abound knowledges,but also have a good honestness of vocation.lastly,it is possible that I afford to the work now if you can give me a chance.
I am looking forward to hearing your message. yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear Sir or Madam, 【yours(y大写) sincerely,
Li Ming】(这一部分位于右下角,不是中间) 点评:5-6分最后一段可以加一句客套的话,例如Thanks for your time and consideration.等,以至于不会显的很单薄。语言的表达能力需要加强。这种作文可以多背几个模板。
I am very glad to meet the news that your company is seeking employees about computer technology from news paper recently. It is a very good opportunity to me.
First of all, I have done experiment of the computer technology for five years, and Many(m小写) practices help me to become a better worker. Secondly, I have not only abound(abound是个动词,这里需要个形容词abundant)knowledges(拼写错误), but also have(去掉,注意前边have位于not only之前) a good honestness(拼写错误) of vocation. lastly(l大写), it is possible that I afford to the work now if you can give me a chance.
I am looking forward to hearing(加介词from) your message.
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