I got the news that your company is searching a marketing manager of the comging product promotion. I hope to apply to this position.
I am confident about my experience and knowledge on this field for my nearly five years of working period. I am certificated on Bachelor degree of manegement and admistration. I have been living in this city for 10 years so that I am familiar with the local condition and the favor of the citizens around. I believe that after we make the first step of investigation on the consumers preference, we could make a well project for advertisting and thereafter get a satisfied selling prospect.
Best Wishes
LiMing
考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear Sir/Madam, I got the news that your company is searching a marketing manager of the comging(拼写错误) product promotion. I hope to apply to(一般用for,apply for) this position. I am confident about my experience and knowledge on this field for my nearly five years of working period(这里表达的不太好,建议将你的工作经验拿出来单独写一句话). I am certificated on Bachelor degree of manegement(拼写错误,management) and admistration(拼写错误,administration). I have been living in this city for 10 years so that I am familiar with the local condition and the favor of the citizens around. I believe that after we make the first step of investigation on the consumers(consumers) preference, we could make a well project for advertisting(拼写错误,advertising) and thereafter get a satisfied selling prospect. Hope to hear from you soon. Best Wishes LiMing (一般落款用Yours sincerely/truly,下一行LiMing的形式,位于右下角) 点评:6-7分拼写错误有点多,另外格式上不要失分,否则太可惜。
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