考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改27

　　I got the news that your company is searching a marketing manager of the comging product promotion. I hope to apply to this position.

　　I am confident about my experience and knowledge on this field for my nearly five years of working period. I am certificated on Bachelor degree of manegement and admistration. I have been living in this city for 10 years so that I am familiar with the local condition and the favor of the citizens around. I believe that after we make the first step of investigation on the consumers preference, we could make a well project for advertisting and thereafter get a satisfied selling prospect.

　　Best Wishes

　　LiMing

　　考研英语作文批改点评如下：

　　Dear Sir/Madam, I got the news that your company is searching a marketing manager of the comging(拼写错误) product promotion. I hope to apply to(一般用for，apply for) this position. I am confident about my experience and knowledge on this field for my nearly five years of working period(这里表达的不太好，建议将你的工作经验拿出来单独写一句话). I am certificated on Bachelor degree of manegement(拼写错误，management) and admistration(拼写错误，administration). I have been living in this city for 10 years so that I am familiar with the local condition and the favor of the citizens around. I believe that after we make the first step of investigation on the consumers(consumers) preference, we could make a well project for advertisting(拼写错误，advertising) and thereafter get a satisfied selling prospect. Hope to hear from you soon. Best Wishes LiMing (一般落款用Yours sincerely/truly，下一行LiMing的形式，位于右下角) 点评：6-7分拼写错误有点多，另外格式上不要失分，否则太可惜。