考研英语待批改作文:
Dear HR Manager,
I have found your job advertisements on the website JobSeeker.Com yestoday.It is attracted me want to apply Excecutive Assistant of your campany.
With five years working experience in an national factory,which make me have a strength ability of commuication and team corperation.Now I have finished continuing education of MBA,which enlight me to build a new career.In order to put my knowledge into practice,I would like to work for a well-managed and successful campany just like yours.
If I can be admitted by your campany, I will assist CEO do some useful management and help him deal with difficult documents.I m really eager to work for your comany and work with colleagues.
My resume will send to you by post letter tomorrow.Looking forward to your recent reply and thank you for reading my letter.
------------------------------------------------------------- Yours,Sincerely
-------------------------------------------------------------- Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear HR Manager,I have found(用过去时就可以了,没有用完成时的语境) your job advertisements on the website JobSeeker.Com yestoday(这里是什么意思?). It is attracted me(加不定式to) want to apply Excecutive(拼写错误,executive) Assistant of your campany(拼写错误company). 【With five years(five-year或者是five years) working experience in an(应该用a) national factory, which make me have a strength ability of commuication(拼写错误) and team corperation(拼写错误).前半句是一个介词短语,后半句是定语从句,这句话的结构是不正确的,把with 和,which去掉,把make改成makes】 Now I have finished continuing education of MBA, which enlight(拼写错误,应该用三单形式enlightens) me to build a new career. In order to put my knowledge into practice, I would like to work for a well-managed and successful campany(拼写错误company) just like yours. If I can be admitted by your campany(拼写错误company), I will assist CEO do some useful management and help him deal with difficult documents. I m really eager to work for your comany(拼写错误company) and work with colleagues. My resume will send to you by post letter tomorrow. Looking forward to your recent reply and thank you for reading my letter.------------------------------------------------------------- Yours,Sincerely(s小写)-------------------------------------------------------------- Li Ming 点评:4-5分语法错误有点多,尤其是第一段开头就出现了几处语法错误,最后两段简练一些并成一段。I will assist CEO do some useful management and help him deal with difficult documents这句话可以去掉,因为这正式这个职位需要做的。
【三维设计】2017届高考英语二轮复习(通用版)练习:第2板块题型3 阅读理解词义猜测题专练(2)(含解析)
【三维设计】2017届高考英语二轮复习(通用版)练习:第2板块题型3 阅读理解推理判断题专练(1)(含解析)
【三维设计】2017届高考英语二轮复习(通用版)练习:第2板块题型3 阅读理解细节理解题专练(1)(含解析)
【三维设计】2017届高考英语二轮复习(通用版)练习:第2板块题型4 阅读七选五(含解析)
2017最值得期待的27部大片!一部都不能错过!
你能放下手机吗 Can You Put Down Your Smart Phone
2014届高考英语一轮复习精选阅读理解文章六十篇(2)
【三维设计】2017届高考英语二轮复习(通用版)练习:第2板块题型4 阅读理解+阅读七选五板块提速练(1)(含解析)
2014届高考英语一轮复习讲义语法系列之非谓语动词
谷歌医疗数据交易引发质疑
2014届高考英语一轮复习讲义语法系列之非谓语动词
外媒看中国:女员工该不该放姨妈假?
2014届高考英语一轮复习讲义语法系列之非谓语动词
当月光女孩遇上阳光男孩
2014届高考英语一轮复习精选阅读理解文章六十篇(1)
【三维设计】2017届高考英语二轮复习(通用版)练习:第2板块题型3 阅读理解 第1讲 细节理解题
【三维设计】2017届高考英语二轮复习(通用版)练习:第1板块 语法填空+短文改错组合练(8)(含解析)
2014届高考英语一轮复习讲义语法系列之非谓语动词
【三维设计】2017届高考英语二轮复习(通用版)练习:第2板块题型4 阅读理解+阅读七选五板块提速练(2)(含解析)
国内英语资讯:Top leadership to maintain fight against corruption
正在消失的长城 The Missing of the Great Wall
【三维设计】2017届高考英语二轮复习(通用版)练习:第2板块题型3 阅读理解细节理解题专练(2)(含解析)
【三维设计】2017届高考英语二轮复习(通用版)练习:第2板块题型3 阅读理解主旨大意题专练(2)(含解析)
落下的书本 The Left Books
【三维设计】2017届高考英语二轮复习(通用版)练习:第1板块 语法填空+短文改错组合练(3)(含解析)
【三维设计】2017届高考英语二轮复习(通用版)练习:第2板块题型3 阅读理解高考题型仿真练(1)(含解析)
网上医疗服务 Online Medical Service
如何加快自我成长的速度?
【三维设计】2017届高考英语二轮复习(通用版)练习:第2板块题型3 阅读理解词义猜测题专练(1)(含解析)
2014届高考英语一轮复习讲义语法系列之非谓语动词
不限 |
英语教案 |
英语课件 |
英语试题 |
不限 |
不限 |
上册 |
下册 |
不限 |