考研英语待批改作文:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Im writting this letter in order to applying for your recently advrtised position for interior designer .I obtain the news form newpaer.I am suer that I am qualitied it .
I am a interior designer from Department of Envionmental Art.With this letter that I proved detail resume. First ,I have been work experience for 7 years. Second, I have acquiet many detail of struction ,Equipment, local and national lows. Third, I could ripidly operating computer. In addition, I could led the team work owing to I have cheerful personality.
Finally, I look forward to your reply,and to attending yours company.
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Im writting(拼写错误,writing) this letter in order to applying(改成apply,in order to do) for your recently advrtised(拼写错误,advertised) position for interior designer .I obtain the news form(加冠词)newpaer(拼写错误,newspaper). I am suer(拼写错误,sure) that I am qualitied(拼写错误,qualified to,加介词to) it .
I am a(应该用不定冠词an,后面是以元音开头的词语) interior designer from Department of Envionmental(拼写错误,environmental) Art. With this letter that I proved detail resume. First ,I have been work experience for 7 years(可以说I have worked for 7 years或是I have a seven-year work experience,但是不能将两种说话合在一起说). Second, I have acquiet(拼写错误,acquired?) many detail(应该用复数details) of struction(拼写错误,structure?) , Equipment(e不用大写), local and national lows. Third, I could ripidly(拼写错误,rapidly) operating computer. In addition, I could led the team work owing to I have cheerful personality.
Finally, I look forward to your reply, and to attending yours company.
Yours sincerely
Li Ming(这一部分写在右下角)
点评:4-5分
主要的问题是拼写错误比较多,这会让自己的作文比较吃亏,好好背一下常用单词的拼写。写完作文后快速检查一遍内容。
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