2015考研英语看图作文范例点评:水资源危机
写作原文
What a thought-provoking picture!In the picture ,many people who are taking bowls are rapidly running to the death ,and everyone is urgently hoping to get some water ,but the death seems to be seriously weak because of lacking watertoo .Undoubtly ,we all konw the water is very important to humanity ,and the lack of water sources is becoming increasingly serious problem in zhe moder society .Indeed ,on the earth ,there exist a lot of water ,including the river ,the sea and the water under the earth ,bue there is a phenomenon of water shortage ,why ? On one thing ,we can notmake use of all water on the earth ,such as the water in the sea .On another ,with the developmeng of society ,people need more and more water to promote the economy ,and the pollution of water is becoming an increasingly serious problem .And above all ,people do not have an awareness of protecting water sources .In order to ease this problem ,various steps have to be adapted and both the government and everyong could not shirk their accountability .Firstly ,the government should make relevang laws and regulationgs to protect water .And then ,what shuold we do is very simple ,everyone do not waste water .I am firmly convinced that under peopleefforts the problem will be solved and we will have a good future .
总体点评
考研英语作文的整体思路你已经基本掌握,但文中还存在个别简单的问题,比如:文中的单词拼写错误较多,这些错误可能是由于作者在电脑输入过程中造成的,以后应该注意,无论是手写版还是电子版,都应该保证单词的准确。其次,建议作者加强语句组织能力,多积累并模仿经典语句,不断提高自己的写作能力。建议作者在写作完之后花费几分钟时间来回读文章,这样便会减少不必要的错误。
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