考研英语看作文范例点评：山寨文化

　　2015考研英语看图作文范例点评：山寨文化

　　写作原文

　　The picture describes a prevailing phenomenon that the copycating is become more and more populat.In picture the man painting the vase which his mind is fulled of money, large of fake products behind withhim .That may created a culturalso called copycatingculture Slow growing fish are outlive than fast growing one.Make money we should choicea batter ways .In our social we live ,people always saw the money as their primary reason for being .No mater businessman or producter they make money be anxious to achieve quick success and get instant benefits,they make money by a wrong means like copy the well goods what sell well,what more ,productersproductinggoodsin low capture or added poisonous in food,how terrible it is ,that way to product food harmful with people.Obviously the events of sanlu milk poweder it can be said babys disaste,many knock-off didnt conform with official safety standards .Recently,the event about copycating iphone charger result in user die rise people care about copycating againabove all of accident caused by fake product i think that many reason result it but the most important have three. The first ,was the low moral consciousness of business and producter ,they want noting except money that careless consumers .thesecond ,from consumers options,they choice the low price something compare with high price ,and the most of copycating attract consumers by low price .the last as supervision department didnt enhance supervise.In my opinion there are some ways that defending the phenomenon of copycating ,primary is as consumers we are dong buy the copycating,the second ,surpervision department take serious methods attack copycating producters good people do noting that like help bed tings so we all should join in the campaign that defend copycating

　　总体点评

　　文章整体是以汉语式英语完成的，建议作者从最简单的做起，先积累一些词汇，句子;并学习简单的语法知识，要写好文章，首先要能写出好句子，而好句子则是建立在正确的句子基础之上。一定要搞清楚句子的成分，简单句一般是由主语+谓语+宾语或主语+系动词+表语构成;在弄清楚简单句的基础之上，再学习复杂的从句，一步一个脚印，踏踏实实提高自己的写作成绩。你可以在积累、学习一段时间之后，写一些句子，然后再练习写文章。

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