思路点拨
本图描述的场景是一副令人喜闻乐见的,中,一只可爱的小猪造型的储蓄罐,正在接住自来水里滴下来的水滴,像存钱一样,存储水滴。实际上,它储存的不是水,它储存的是幸福。我们可以看出,人们有了节水意识。但是,从正在滴水的水龙头看,还是有人忽略了节约用水这一问题。因此,本文可以这样写作:
第一段:描述;第二段:分析有些人浪费水的心理,并阐述水资源的宝贵;第三段:建议措施。
思维拓展
实际上,积极正面的图片写作,和揭示负面现象的文章没有什么本质上的区别,只要我们笔锋一转,就能把它继续按照原来的套路写。
本文也可以从低碳、环保的角度出发进行写作。
关于节约能源的话题,都可以按照这个行文思路和语言模式进行展开。
高分范文
Water used to be mistaken to be an unlimited and renewable resource. Actually, water resource is very limited and precious. It is fortunate that now the public is starting to pay attention①. Just as is depicted in the picture, just like saving money, the lovely and smiling piggy bank is collecting every drop of water falling from the water tap。
However, water shortage is still a serious problem threatening the existence and survival of the whole human being, and yet the phenomenon of wasting water can still easily be found anywhere in our daily life②. For example, water taps are frequently left on by careless users. Someone even assumes that they have the right to waste water because they pay for it so that it has nothing to do with others. In fact, so precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it③. Water resource is indispensable④ not only in our daily life but also in the industry and agriculture. And water is the wealth of the whole mankind, and it is hard to imagine what the world would be like⑤ when there is no more water。
Even though an increasing number of people have become aware of⑥ this emergency, further measures still need to be taken. On the macro level, the whole world should make a joint effort to fight against waste of water. On the micro level, publicizing activities, such as broadcasting wonderful ways on how to save water on TV and other media, should be conducted. To store water means to store happiness and only by saving water can we save a better life for our offspring。
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