考研英语作文批改范例10

　　Mr and Mrss 　　Id like to contribute to Project Hope by offer（offering） financial aid to a child in a remote now.I didnt mean to trouble you but have to,would you help me to find a candicate please?I want a children who studying （studies）hard ,gets a top grade,love the life very much and enjoy everything all over the world, have the enthetic to do the benefit works,thirsty to get new acknowledge and really poor that his family cant afford him.What is the most important,he must have the ambitions to create our country when he grow up.I think that I coule（could） provide all through his studying years.I know you are all busy,but Ill thank you very much if you can help me. Good luck! 　　Yours, 　　Li Ming