考研英语作文批改范例15

　　To whom it may concern, 　　Im a senior student from Wuhan University. Supported by my parents, I want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child with an attitude of hard studying and not being at school just because cannot afford the tuition（建议使用定语从句表达，who studies hard and is forced to drop out for the reason that he cannot afford the tuitions）. I will offer two years（） tuition and keep in touch with the child by letter to encourage he or she（him or her） to study well. After I graduate from school, I would like to offering （still like to offer）financial aid to the child to help he or she（him or her） accomplish all elementary education when I have（since I will have） a stable source of incoming（复数incomings）. 　　Your（Yours） sincerely, 　　Li Ming