考研英语小作文批改感谢信5-7分例文3

　　考研英语待批改作文：

　　5-7分

　　第三篇

　　Dear Teacher,

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your ongoing patience and selfless care. If it had not been for your assistance in our English study, I fear that I would have been failed my CET4 and CET6.

　　Even one agrees that it was you who has always been devoting most of your free time to day to day English teaching and instruction in test-taking skills. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英语作文批改点评如下：

　　Dear Teacher,

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your ongoing patience and selfless care. If it had not been for your assistance in our English study, I fear that I would have been failed(改为failing)(加to pass) my CET4 and CET6.

　　Even one agrees that it was you who has always been devoting most of your free time to day to day English teaching and instruction(改为instructing) in test-taking skills. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　7分

　　同学你好，作文没有什么大问题，但是要注意时态的一致以及某些句型的固定用法。