0-4分
第一篇
Dear Elle,
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you gave me help at the school party last Sunday. If it had not been for your assistance in you lend me your beautiful dress, I fear that I would have been appearing in once a year campus dancing party.
Everyone agrees that it was you who generously offered dress to me. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
Dear Elle,
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you gave me help(for 后面不能加句子,可改为your help) at the school party last Sunday. If it had not been for your assistance in you lend me your beautiful dress, I fear that I would have been appearing (appeared)in once a year campus dancing party.
Every one agrees that it was you who generously offered dress to me. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
2分
同学你好,第一段的最后一句话中,由于没有写not,使文章的意思完全相反,因此,一定要好好研究一下虚拟语气的用法。另外,for 后面是不能加句子的。
第二篇
Dear Bob,
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you to help me to improve my English during these days. If it had not been for your assistance in teaching me various knowledge including the culture of English, Then help me to practice English face to face, I fear that I would have been seek to the way of learning English for a long time without your help.
Everyone agrees that it was you who are warmly and likely to help others without the pay. Again,I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
Dear Bob,
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you to help me to improve my English during these days. If it had not been for your assistance in teaching me various knowledge including the culture of English, Then(删除) help me to practice English face to face, I fear that I would have been seek to the way of learning English for a long time without your help.(删除)
Every one agrees that it was you who are warmly and likelyto help others without the pay. Again,I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
4分
同学你好,写完书信要有yours sincerely 和 你的名字。英语的句号是.此外,建议你看一下关于强调句和虚拟语气的知识。
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