考研英语小作文批改邀请信5-7分例文1

　　考研英语待批改作文：

　　5-7分

　　第一篇

　　Dear Kate,

　　There will be a Christmas party at English corner on Dec.25th. We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at 6 p.m. This will be followed by a game. At around 7 p.m. a meeting will be held. I really hope you can make it. RSVP before Dec.24th.

　　Campus English Corner

　　October 22, 2012

　　考研英语作文批改点评如下：

　　Dear Kate,

　　There will be a Christmas party at English corner on Dec.25th. We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at 6 p.m. This will be followed by a game. At around 7 p.m. a meeting will be held. I really hope you can make it. RSVP before Dec.24th.

　　(加Sincerely yours，) Campus English Corner

　　October 22, 2012(删除)

　　5分

　　同学你好，考研小作文的字数要求是100词左右，你的作文虽然没有大问题，但是包含的内容太少，句型变换等也太少了。另外，要注意书信的格式。