考研英语待批改作文:
5-7分
第五篇
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a graduate from Peking University. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about accommodation.
The reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommates inconsiderate behavior. In the first place, his friends are constantly visiting him. In addition, he regularly holds noisy parties. Under these circumstances, I find it inconvenient tome to take a rest in dormitory.
I appreciate it very much if you could find a single room for me,preferably not in the same building but as near to the college campus as possible, and I would like to have this matter settled by the next semester.
Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a graduate from Peking University. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about accommodation.
The reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommates inconsiderate behavior. In the first place, his friends are constantly visiting him.In addition, he regularly holds noisy parties. Under these circumstances, I find it inconvenient to me to take a rest in dormitory.
I appreciate it very much if you could find a single room for me,preferably not in the same building but as near to the college campus as possible, and I would like to have this matter settled by the next semester.
Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Ming
7分
同学你好,这篇小作文基本没问题,但是对于固定的句式一定要背牢,而且要保持时态的一致。
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