考研英语待批改作文:
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第一篇
Dear Elle,
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you gave me help at the school party last Sunday. If it had not been for your assistance in you lend me your beautiful dress, I fear that I would have been appearing in once a year campus dancing party.
Everyone agrees that it was you who generously offered dress to me. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear Elle,
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you gave me help(for 后面不能加句子,可改为your help) at the school party last Sunday. If it had not been for your assistance in you lend me your beautiful dress, I fear that I would have been appearing (appeared)in once a year campus dancing party.
Every one agrees that it was you who generously offered dress to me. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
2分
同学你好,第一段的最后一句话中,由于没有写not,使文章的意思完全相反,因此,一定要好好研究一下虚拟语气的用法。另外,for 后面是不能加句子的。
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