考研英语小作文批改求职信5-7分例文1

　　考研英语待批改作文：

　　5-7分

　　第一篇

　　Dear sir,

　　I just read an advertisement in the newspaper about the recruitment information. I would like to apply for a position as a software engineer.

　　I am a recent graduate of Northwest University with a doctor degree in Computer Science. I understand how to be a successful software engineer. My professional skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your requirement. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as an assistant software engineer at Northwest University for two months.

　　I would be happy to meet you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thansfor your consideration.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英语作文批改点评如下：

　　Dear sir,(s大写)

　　I just read an advertisement in the newspaper about the recruitment information. I would like to apply for a position as a software engineer.

　　I am a recent graduate of Northwest University with a doctor degree in Computer Science. I understand how to be a successful software engineer. My professional skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your requirement. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as an assistant software engineer at Northwest University for two months.

　　I would be happy to meet you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thansfor(改为Thank you for) your consideration.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　7分

　　同学你好，标点符号与后面的单词空一格。你的作文写的很不错，就是要再细心一点。