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Dear Bob,
There will be held a wonderful music concern for piano and violin in the Musical Hall of the Centre Conservatory Of Music on Junuary 15st . We would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at 7:00 PM on time. This will be followed by a ticket that we have to given you by Express Email Survice before the concern. At around 6:50PM, January 15st, you may arrived to the CCOM because staff is checking our tickets ahead of time.
I really hope you can make it RSVP before 6:50PM,January 15st,2013.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear Bob,
There will be held (删除)a wonderful music (音乐会是concert)concern for(改为concerning) piano and violin in the Musical Hall of the Centre Conservatory Of Music on Junuary(拼写错误,改为January) 15st . We would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at 7:00 PM on time. This will be followed by a ticket that we have to given you by Express Email Survice before the concern. At around 6:50PM, January 15st, you may arrived to the CCOM because staff is checking our tickets ahead of time.
I really hope you can make it RSVP before 6:50PM,January 15st,2013.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
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