考研英语待批改作文:
5-7分
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I just read an advertisement in yesterdays China Daily about the recruitment of your corporation. I would like to apply for a position as a business manager.
I understand that you are longing for highly-qualified individuals who process excellent skills, teamwork spirit and rich experience and I feel that I am competent to meet your requirement. My professional skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suit to your expectation. I am a recent graduate of Sun Yet-sen University with a bachorlors degree in Business Administration. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as a staff assistant at the China telecom, where my practical skills were rapidly cultivated and quickly developed.
I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I just read an advertisement in yesterdays China Daily about the recruitment of your corporation. I would like to apply for a position as a business manager.
I understand that you are longing for highly-qualified(改为high-qualified) individuals who process excellent skills, teamwork spirit and rich experience and I feel that I am competent to meet your requirement. My professional skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suit to your expectation. I am a recent graduate of Sun Yet-sen University with a bachorlors degree in Business Administration. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as a staff assistant at the China telecom, where my practical skills were rapidly cultivated and quickly developed.
I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
7分
同学你好,标点符号与后面的单词空一格。要注意控制字数,考研的时候超过20个词扣0.5分,超过50词只给1分辛苦分。作文基本没有什么问题。
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