写作原文
As is vividly depicted in the picture, a father has received a letter from his son, on which without anything excepta word: money. It reveals a serious issue of our society: more and more people live off their parents, even if they are old enough. We call the people who is boomerang kids.A careful analysis of cartoon may reveals some reasons under the problem, which involves three causes. For one thing,Chinese parents indulge their children so that it takesfew time to develop their children independence. In addition, the boomerang kids may never realize the hard working and enterprising spirit isa magic weapon to make their life pleasant, efficient ,successful. Last but not least, the education in our school ,especaillyuniversity, attach more importance to academic marks, which ignores the significance of students independence ablilty.In order to solve these issues, both family and school should join hands to create an free atmosphere to spirit the young people take care of themselves, while at the same time, the boomerang kids efforts are indispensible, they should change the lazy behaviors. To conclude my essay, I would like to quote an old saying a young idler, an old beggar.
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