英语六级热点范文7

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline （given in Chinese） below: 　　1）随着人们生活水平的提高，一些人认为节俭和朴素的生活方式已经过时了 　　2）但是很多人反对这种说法 　　3）你的看法是，为什么? 　　Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue? 　　_______________________________________________________________________________ 　　_______________________________________________________________________________ 　　_______________________________________________________________________________ 　　行文思路 　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一种观点，提纲第2点提出另外一种相反的观点，提纲第3点要求谈谈我的观点，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。 　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：提出第1种观点：节俭和朴素的生活方式已经过时了，并说明理由;提出第2种观点：节俭和朴素仍然是一种美德，并说明理由;表明我对节俭的看法，并说明理由。 　　高分范文 　　Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue? 　　With the improvement of the living standards, many people are [1]no longer interested in the simple life style and some of them even feel ashamed to be thrifty. What they pursue is the latest fashion. In their eyes, thrift is already out of style. 　　However, still other people insist that thrift is a good virtue. They say that the unprecedented power of production doesnt mean that we are entitled to a life of extravagance, because our natural resources are limited and some of them even are on the decline. Moreover, they hold that waste may lead to degradation of social atmosphere and environmental pollution as well. 　　As to me, I prefer the latter opinion. I believeWaste not, want not. The truth of this saying is not to give up comfort but to enhance efficiency. In fact, economic growth depends enormously on saving. Besides, there are still millions of Chinese living under poverty line. We can never afford reckless waste. Therefore, [10]it is no doubt that thrift is still a good virtue that we should not give up. 　　亮点点评 　　[1]不再。 　　表示递进。 　　引出另外一种观点。 　　在下降。 　　过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。 　　用于引出自己的观点或选择。 　　引用谚语俭以防匮。 　　not but连接并列结构，意为不是而是。 　　现在分词短语作后置定语。 　　[10]毫无疑问。 　　佳句临摹 　　佳句：Our natural resources are limited and some of them even are on the decline. 　　临摹：车祸使人们的财产遭受极大的损失，甚至还夺走了无数人的生命。 　　___________________________________________________________________________. 　　2.佳句：The truth of this saying is not to give up comfort but to enhance efficiency. 　　临摹：我们永远都不应该低估自己的能力，而应该相信一句谚语：有志者，事竟成。 　　___________________________________________________________________________. 　　KEY: 　　Traffic accidents have caused great damages to peoples properties and even taken away thousands of peoples lives. 　　2. We should never underestimate our abilities but should believe in the proverb: Where there is a will, there is a way. 　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic On Dieting. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline （given in Chinese） below: 　　1）现在有越来越多人的选择节食，有的人是为了健康，但是的人是为了有一个苗条的身材 　　2）分析节食减肥可能带来的影响 　　3）你的建议 　　On Dieting 　　_______________________________________________________________________________ 　　_______________________________________________________________________________ 　　_______________________________________________________________________________ 　　行文思路 　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象并要求说明原因，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象可能带来的影响，提纲第3点要求针对该现象提出我的建议，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。 　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述越来越多的人节食的现象并分析主要原因;阐述节食不当可能带来的影响;针对节食给出我的建议。 　　高分范文 　　On Dieting 　　Nowadays more and more people are beginning to go on a diet. Some people are concerned with their health, and they go on a diet in order to lose unwanted weight. But still others, [1]especially the young women, are paying too much attention to their outward appearance. They become the leading numbers who go on a diet. 　　However, dieting might bring great negative effects on people. For one thing, quite a lot of people dont really need dieting to keep health, and they diet just because they want to keep slim. For them, dieting not only is useless but also might damage their health. For another, some people lack enough knowledge on how to diet scientifically. As a result, they are likely to suffer from malnutrition. 　　Considering the serious damage of unhealthy dieting, we should be cautious in dieting. In my opinion, dieting,for whatever reasons, needs professional guidance. Only with right guidance can dieting work as we expect. 　　亮点点评 　　[1]尤其，表示强调。 　　成为主力军。 　　过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。 　　用于引出对危害或负面影响的阐述。 　　not only but also用于连接并列成分。 　　考虑到，鉴于，介词。 　　不管因为什么原因，whatever意为无论什么。 　　only+状语位于句首，引起句子部分倒装。 　　像我们期望的那样。 　　佳句临摹 　　佳句：For them, dieting not only is useless but also might damage their health. 　　临摹：基因技术不仅使动植物受益而且还有助于提高人类的生活质量。 　　___________________________________________________________________________. 　　2.佳句：In my opinion, dieting, for whatever reasons, needs professional guidance. 　　临摹： 无论你的目标是什么，你都必须通过诚实的劳动来实现它。 　　___________________________________________________________________________. 　　3.佳句：Only with right guidance can dieting work as we expect. 　　临摹：只有修满足够的学分，学生才能够获准毕业。 　　___________________________________________________________________________. 　　KEY: 　　Genetic technology helps not only the plant and animals but also human beings to live a higher quality Whatever your aim is, you must worked honestly to attain it. Only when adequate credits have been achieved can students gain the qualification for graduation.