高分作文标志 1:四级120-150字;六级150180字; 2、是否长短句交叉; 3、用词是否恰当,准确,形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词; 4、关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词; 下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项: 1.适当用被动代替主动,这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要总是用we / I 举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段:It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus,its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. 2.善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。 如however / therefore /for example/I believe做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。 比如说:Other individuals, however, take the attitude that 3.一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的代替太宽泛的。比如上面例子中,applicable代替proper, approaches代替ways, implement代替carry out, sharpen ones competitive edge代替enhance ones competitiveness 下面举一篇我南京六级班上一位同学写的优秀作文的例子,看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高。 Computer and I By Simmy I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me. exceedingly替换very thrilling替换exciting sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb替换sb. be interested in sth. google替换search an army of替换a lot of The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure! The dawn of the new century witnessed是一个精彩句型,用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情; Increasing popularity替换more and more popular Coincident with非常地道的词汇,表达与一致的意思,替换With Advancement替换development Pour into 替换enter into Current 替换now Appeal to sb.替换sb. be interested in sth. Growing individuals替换more and more people It is no exaggeration to say经典句型,说某事是毫不夸张的 For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email. For a start替换To begin with We can, freely, search用了插入语的写作手法 our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被动 Additionally替换In addition / Besides Deliver替换send There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying. There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings,这个句子有三个精彩之处,首先There is no denying that这个句型,还有however作为插入语,function in the disservice of替换do harm to Emerging代替appearing 2010年6月全国大学英语四、六级考试定于6月19日举行,为了帮助考生顺利通过考试,特整理了以下六级写作套用句型。 As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet. No garden has no weeds替换Every coin has two sides Computers do play,do强调 Positive替换important / good等 A slice of替换a part of Unfavorable替换bad Impacts替换effects / influences We should, therefore, take advantage of使用插入语 Fruits 替换advantage Facet替换aspect 各位同学,上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点,作文怎么会不得高分呢! 以下是30个最经典的替换词,各位同学可以参考一下。 1.individuals,characters, folks代替 2: positive, favorable, rosy,promising ,perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding代替good 3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse代替bad 如果bad做表语,可以有be less impressive代替 eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive. 4.代替many. 注:用many, if not most一定要小心,many后一定要有词。 Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that.同理用most, if not all ,代替most. 5: a slice of, quiet a few , several代替some 6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think 7:affair ,business ,matter代替thing 8: shared代common 9.reap huge fruits代替get much benefit ) 10:for my part ,from my own perspective代替in my opinion 11:Increasing,growing代替more and more 27. interaction代替communication 28.frown on sth代替be against , disagree with sth 29.to name only a few, as an example代替for example 30. next to/virtually impossible,代替nearly impossible 用于文章主题句 1.不用说 It goes without saying that子句 = needless to say 子句 = It is obvious that子句 = Obviously, S. + V. 例︰不用说早睡早起是值得的。 It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours. 2.是不可能的; 无法 There is no Ving = There is no way of Ving. = There is no possibility of Ving. = It is impossible to V. = It is out of the question to V. = No one can V. = We cannot V. 例︰不可否认的 成功的事业关键在于健康的身心。 There is not denying that successful business lies in a healthy body and mind. 3.我深信 I am greatly convinced 子句 = I am greatly assured 子句 例︰我深信预防是于治疗。 I am greatly convinced that prevention is better than cure. 4.在各种之中 Among various kinds of , = Of all the , 例︰在各种运动中 我尤其喜欢慢跑。 Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular. 5.是很容易证明的。 It can be easily proved 子句 例︰时间最珍贵是很容易证明的。 It can be easily proved that nothing is more precious than time. 2010年6月全国大学英语四、六级考试定于6月19日举行,为了帮助考生顺利通过考试,特整理了以下六级写作套用句型。 6.无论如何强调都不为过 cannot be overemphasized 例︰交通安全的重要性无论如何强调都不为过。 The importance of traffic safety cannot be overemphasized. 7.就我的看法 我认为 In my opinion, = To my mind, . = As far as I am concerned, = I am of the opinion that子句 例︰就我的看法 打电动玩具既花费时间也有害健康。 In my opinion, playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health. 8. 每个人都知道 Everyone knows 子句 就我所知 As far as my knowledge is concerned, 例︰就我所知 下列方法对我帮助很大。 As far as my knowledge is concerned, the following ways are of great help to me. 9.毫无疑问地 There is no doubt 子句 例︰毫无疑问地 近视在我国的年轻人中是一个严重的问题。 There is no doubt that near-sightedness is a serious problem among the youth of our country. 10. 根据我个人经验 According to my personal experience, = Based on my personal experience, 例︰根据我个人经验 微笑已带给我许多好处。 According to my personal experience, smile has done me a lot of good. 11. 在我认识的人当中 也许没有一个人比更值得我尊敬。 Of all the people I know, perhaps non deserves my respect more than 例︰在我认识的人当中 也许没有一个人比我的英文老师张老师更值得我尊敬。 Of all the people I know, perhaps non deserves my respect more than Miss Chang, my English teacher. 12. 在我的求学过程中 我忘不了 In the course of my schooling. I will never forget 例︰在我的求学过程中 我忘不了学习英文所遭到的大困难。 In the course of my schooling. I will never forget the great difficulty I encountered in learning English 14. 在这信息的年代 扮演重要的角色。 In the age of information and communication, plays an important role. 在今日工业社会中 是生命不可或缺的。 In todays industrial society, is indispensable to life. 例︰在这信息的年代 计算机扮演非常重要的角色。 In this age of information and communication, the computer plays an extremely important role. 15. 在讨论 一个人不得不承认。 In dealing with , one cannot but admit 子句 例︰在讨论未来的职业 一个人不得不承认尽早决定未来的职业很重要。 In dealing with ones future career, one cannot but admit that it is very important to decide ones future career as early as possible. 16. 世上没有什么比更令我高兴。 Nothing in the world can delight me so much as 例︰世上没有什么比到快餐店吃汉堡更令我高兴。 Nothing in the world can delight me so much as having hamburgers in fast-food restaurants. 17. 是必要的 It is necessary that S V 是重要的 It is important/essential that S V 是适当的 It is proper that S V 是紧急的 It is urgent that S V 例︰我们当保持公共场所清洁是应当的。 It is proper that we keep the public places clean. 18. 每当我听到 我就忍不住感到兴奋。Whenever I hear , I cannot but feel excited. 每当我做 我就忍不住感到悲伤。 Whenever I do , I cannot but feel sad. 每当我想到 我就忍不住感到紧张。Whenever I think of , I cannot but feel nervous. 每当我遭遇 我就忍不住感到害怕。Whenever I meet with , I cannot but feel frightened. 每当我看到 我就忍不住感到惊讶。Whenever I see , I cannot but feel surprised. 例︰每当我想到我家附近那一条清澈的小溪 我就忍不住感到悲伤。 Whenever I think of the clean brook near my home, I cannot but feel sad. = Every time I think of the clean brook near my home, I cannot help feeling sad. 19. 据说 It is said 子句 一般认为 It is thought 子句 大家都知道 It is known 子句 据报导 It is reported 子句 一般预料 It is expected 子句 一般估计 It is estimated 子句 一般相信 It is believed 子句 例︰一般相信阅读增加我们的知识、扩大我们的心胸。 It is believed reading increases our knowledge and broadens our mind. 20. 的主要理由是 The main reason why .. is 子句 例︰青少年犯罪的主要理由是社会环境日一败坏。 The main reason why the juveniles commit crimes is that social environment is becoming worse. 21. 俗语说得好:「」。 Well goes an old saying, = As an old saying goes, = An old saying goes, = Its an old saying 子句 例︰俗话说得好:「诚实为上策」。 As an old saying goes, Honesty is the best policy. 2010年6月全国大学英语四、六级考试定于6月19日举行,为了帮助考生顺利通过考试,特整理了以下六级写作套用句型。 22. 用下列方法 in the following ways. 有三个主要理由。 for three major reasons. 要 至少我们可做三件事。 To , there are at least three things we can do. 例︰ 我用下列方法增加信心。 I increase my confidence in the following ways. 人们学外语有三个理由。 People learn a foreign language for three major reasons. 为了维护健康 我们每天至少可做三件事。 To keep healthy, there are at least three things we can do every day. II. 用于文章承转句 23. 那就是亦即 That is to say, = Namely, 例︰我们生活需有规律。也就是说 早睡早起 戒除烟酒。 We need to live a regular life. That is, we can keep good hours and refrain from smoking and drinking in the daily activities. 24. 基于这个理由 For this reason, 为了这个目的 For this purpose, 例︰基于这个理由 我已决定把行医作为未来的职业。 For this reason, I have decided to take practicing medicine as my future career. 25. 我们有理由相信 We have reasons to believe 子句 例︰我们有理由相信体罚应该严格禁止。 We have reasons to believe that corporal punishment should be strictly prohibited. 26. 事实上 As a matter of fact,= In fact, 例︰事实上 健康才是最重要。 As a matter of fact, it is health that counts. 27 此外 我们不应忽视 Besides , we should not neglect 例︰此外 我们不应忽视每个人都想要一个温馨祥和的社会。 In addition, we should not neglect that everyone wants a friendly and peaceful society. 28. 相反地 on the contrary, = by contrast, 例︰相反地 少数学生似乎还在鬼混。 On the contrary, a few students, it seems, are still fooling around. 29.然而 很可惜的是 However, it is a pity that子句 例︰然而 很可惜的是他总是临时抱佛脚。 However, it is a pity that he should always cram at the eleventh hour. 30 换言之 in other words, = to put it differently 例︰换言之 我会尽最大的努力达成我的目标。 In other words, I will try my best to attain my goal. 33. 别人可能认为这是事实 但我不是。我认为 It may be true as assumed by others, but I dont. I believe that子句 例︰别人可能认为这是事实 但我不是。我认为 It may be true as assumed by others, but I dont. I believe that if you have strong determination and perseverance, the success will certainly come to you in the end. 34. 从此之后 我已发现 Ever since then, I have found that子句 例︰从此之后 我已发现 Ever since then, I have found smile the best way to avoid any possible conflicts in our daily lives. 35. 这样说来 假如... 当然毫无疑问地。 In this light, if, there can surely be no doubt 子句 例︰这样说来 假如我们能善用时间 当然毫无疑问地我们会成功。 In this light, if we can make good use of time, there can surely be no doubt that we will get somewhere. 36鉴于社会的实际需要 。 In view of the practical need of society, . 例︰鉴于社会的实际需要 愈来愈多人对学英语有兴趣。 In view of the practical need of society, there are more and more people interested in learning English. III. 用于文章结论句 38. 如果能实践这三点 。 If one can really put the three points into action , 例︰如果能实践这三点 。 If one can really put the three points into action, he will surely be able to live a healthy and happy life. 39. 做这些简单之事 我们一定可以。 By doing these simple things, we surely can . 例︰做这些简单之事 我们一定可以快乐出门平安回家。 By doing these simple things, we surely can go out of the door happily and come back home safe every day. 40. 如此 我相信。 In this way, I believe 子句 例︰如此 我相信大家能够像我一样 享受乘坐公车的乐趣。 In this way, I believe that all the people may be able to enjoy the bus ride like me. 2010年6月全国大学英语四、六级考试定于6月19日举行,为了帮助考生顺利通过考试,特整理了以下六级写作套用句型。 41. 实践这些 。 By putting them into practice, . 例︰实践这些 在智育方面我一直能不断进步。 By putting them into practice, I have been able to make constant progress in intellectual education. 42. 唯有符合此三项要求 我们才能。 Only by living up to the three requirements, can we . 唯有通力合作 我们才能。 Only with combined efforts, can we . 例︰唯有通力合作 我们才能期望台湾不久有新的面貌。 Only with combined efforts, can we expect Taiwan to take a new face in due course. 43. 最后 但并非最不重要 。 Last but no least, . 例︰最后 但并非最不重要 教育上的缺失是助长青少年犯罪的原因。 Last but no least, the shortcoming in education is the cause contributing to juvenile delinquency. 44. 这证据显示~的重要性在怎么强调都不为过。 This evidence shows that the importance of ~ cannot be overemphasized. 例︰这证据显示交通安全的重要性在怎么强调都不为过。 This evidence shows that the importance of traffic safety cannot be overemphasized. 45. 由于这些理由 我。 For these reasons, I . 例︰由于这些理由 我认为在台湾接受大学教育是明智的。 For these reasons, I think that receiving college education in Taiwan is wise. 46. 总而言之 。 In conclusion, = To sum up, 例︰总而言之 好国民应该遵守交通规则。 In conclusion, a good citizen should abide by traffic regulations. 47. 因此 我们能下个结论 那就是。 We can, therefore, come to the conclusion 子句 例︰因此 我们能下个结论 那就是世上自由罪珍贵。 We can, therefore, come to the conclusion that nothing is so precious as freedom in the world. 48. 如果我们能做到如上所述 毫无疑问地 。 If we can do as mentioned above, there can be no doubt 子句 例︰如果我们能做到如上所述 毫无疑问地 我们就能精通英语。 If we can do as mentioned above, there can be no doubt that we can master English 49. 因此 这就是的原因。 Thus, this is the reason why . 例︰因此 这就是我重感冒的原因。 Thus, this is the reason why I caught a bad cold.
【人教版】2014届高考英语一轮复习指导考点针对练:必修5 unit3《Life in the future》
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【人教版】2014届高考英语一轮复习指导考点针对练:选修8 unit5《Meeting your ancestors》
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【人教版】2014届高考英语一轮复习指导考点针对练:必修2 unit3《Computers》
【人教版】2014届高考英语一轮复习指导考点针对练:必修5 unit1《Great scientists》
【人教版】2014届高考英语一轮复习指导考点针对练:必修3 unit1《Festivals around the world》
【人教版】2014届高考英语一轮复习指导考点针对练:选修7 unit1《Living well》
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【人教版】2014届高考英语一轮复习指导考点针对练:选修6 unit1《Art》
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【人教版】2014届高考英语一轮复习指导考点针对练:选修8 unit3《Inventors and inventions》
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【人教版】2014届高考英语一轮复习指导考点针对练:必修2 unit4《Wildlife protection》
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【人教版】2014届高考英语一轮复习指导考点针对练:必修5 unit4《Making the news》
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