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　　世界正在变得越来越小

　　nowadays, science and technology have rapid improvement.

　　that dominates our daily lives, which makes us feel that the world is getting smaller and smaller.

　　currently, the forms of communication are altering day and night as corresponding techniques improving. there are a variety of ways to communicate coming out behind people s growing requisition.

　　mobile telephone, internet and visual telephone, which belong to high technical instrument, are frequently and widely combined with our lives.

　　for instance, we are able to connect with internet, and then function the concerned software, such as icq and msn, to contact others we request to get in touch with.

　　visual telephone is a new style of updated phone, which can transmit voice signal and visual signal simultaneously.

　　synchronously, the traffic vehicle are also coming to be more and more popular.

　　plane, high speed train and high speed shuttle bus are diffused for us.

　　we spend half of original time, even less than that, from one place to another via modernized traffic implement and system.

　　above phenomena reveal that the world is getting smaller and smaller, and universal people are getting closer and closer attribute to the increasingly sophisticated science and technology.