My opinion on certificate craze
The growing tendency among college students to get all kinds of certificates has now evolved into a craze. Just randomly ask a student what he or she is busily engaged in doing, quite possibly, you would get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind. So, whys the craze?
The reason behind this phenomenon is common the enormous pressure of finding a job. Faced with a harsh job market, most students have no choice but to seek more certificates to parlay their qualifications. Another factor is that diploma and certificates still weighs heavily in terms of signifying ones ability. For the sake of increasing their odds of landing a better job, the students are compelled to run from one exam to another.
Though I have an open mind toward the craze on certificates, I suggest that students should be more rational when it comes to certificates, since they do not necessarily tell their ability. Instead, they should be more involved in learning and capability boosting, thus, opportunities would come quite naturally.
文章点评:
这是一篇中等偏上的学生作文。 本文先对学生的考证热进行简介,引出全篇;接着分析这一现象背后的原因;整体看思路清晰,逻辑严密,行文流畅,句式多变,用语较为地道。
本篇亮点表达:
The growing tendency has now evolved into
be busily engaged in doing
The reason behind
harsh job market
have no choice but to
parlay their qualifications
sth. weighs heavily in terms of
increasing ones odds of
be involved in doing
be compelled to do
have an open mind toward
capability boosting
本文有待提高之处:
1. 文章结构上,能看得出该同学试图采用议论文的三段式。逻辑严谨,论证严密;句式表达灵活,用语较为地道。
2. 微观语言点方面,有个主谓一致的方面的错误;有些语句稍显啰嗦,比quite possibly, you would get the answer that 大可简化成youd most likely be told that 更好,意思没有丝毫减损,表达力反而增强许多;另外某些用语多重复,比如job多次出现;为了避免此类现象,文中的the enormous pressure of finding a job 不妨改为 the enormous pressure of getting employed。
从整体看,本篇文章不错,值得参考借鉴,不过用于方面还有待提高。
不定式作宾语
分词的时态
分词作定语
由“名词(代词)+名词”构成的独立主格
关于分词的独立主格结构
使用独立主格结构的几点注意
分词作插入语
独立主格
try doing/to do,go on doing/to do
独立主格用作条件状语
分词的语态
由“名词(代词)+介词短语”构成的独立主格
cease doing/to do
感官动词 + doing/to do
独立主格结构介词使用的问题
With的复合结构作独立主格
英语独立主格用法归纳
由“名词(代词)+副词”构成的独立主格
独立主格结构中的非谓语动词用法
分词独立主格结构的理解技巧
独立主格用作原因状语
分词作状语
独立主格结构的用法说明与注意点
英语独立主格结构说明
regret doing/to do
It’s for sb.和 It’s of sb.
由“名词(代词)+现在分词”构成的独立主格
由“名词(代词)+形容词”构成的独立主格
begin(start) doing/to do
独立主格用作时间状语
不限 |
英语教案 |
英语课件 |
英语试题 |
不限 |
不限 |
上册 |
下册 |
不限 |