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You can find many blind-date shows on many channels on weekend evenings these days. People not only watch such program but also discuss the beautiful girls, handsome men and the activities in the shows.
Several reasons result in the popularity of these shows. First of all, love is no longer extremely private and people, especially young people, are not as shy as their parents when it comes to love. Many prefer showing their love in front of people, even millions of people. Secondly, nowadays working young peoples social network is so narrow that they have to extend their targets on these shows. Not only do they have more choices on the show, but also they advertise themselves to the audience.
In my opinion, we can only treat such programs as mere amusement because I do not quite believe that true love can be created through such as short time. This show may be a place where people get to know each other and listen to advice from guests and hosts, but it is never where two people truly become lovers at the end of the show.
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