高分作文+点评:
高分作文:
You can find many blind-date shows on many channels on weekend evenings these days. People not only watch such program but also discuss the beautiful girls, handsome men and the activities in the shows.
Several reasons result in the popularity of these shows. First of all, love is no longer extremely private and people, especially young people, are not as shy as their parents when it comes to love. Many prefer showing their love in front of people, even millions of people. Secondly, nowadays working young peoples social network is so narrow that they have to extend their targets on these shows. Not only do they have more choices on the show, but also they advertise themselves to the audience.
In my opinion, we can only treat such programs as mere amusement because I do not quite believe that true love can be created through such as short time. This show may be a place where people get to know each other and listen to advice from guests and hosts, but it is never where two people truly become lovers at the end of the show.
点评:
Excellent! 你的思路很清晰,而且表达能力非常好,高分作文!
新版gre写作新题库:argument171
新版gre作文新题库解析-issue26
新版gre写作新题库:argument146
新版gre写作新题库:argument152
新版gre写作新题库:argument143
新版gre写作新题库:argument165
新版gre写作新题库:argument156
新版gre写作新题库:argument145
GRE填空:对立关系类解法之关键词剖析
新GRE写作题目解析4方法
新版gre写作新题库:argument147
新版gre写作新题库:argument144
新版gre写作新题库:argument151
新版gre写作新题库:argument139
名师指导新GRE写作入题
新版gre写作新题库:argument167
新版gre写作新题库:argument138
新版gre写作新题库:argument137
新版gre写作新题库:argument166
新版gre写作新题库:argument149
2012年GRE issue写作优秀实例:全球化大学问题
新GRE考试作文评分标准
新版gre写作新题库:argument157
新版gre写作新题库:argument172
新版gre写作新题库:argument158
新GRE写作11个最实用句式
新版gre写作新题库:argument159
十个给力句式帮你丰富GRE写作
新版gre写作新题库:argument168
2012年GRE issue写作优秀实例:重视认知和推理能力
不限 |
英语教案 |
英语课件 |
英语试题 |
不限 |
不限 |
上册 |
下册 |
不限 |