名师举例指导六级考试写作观点对比型

　　养宠物 有些人认为养宠物很好

　　有些人认为养宠物不好

　　你的观点是什么?

　　本文共分三段。

　　第一段(34句话)

　　第一句话：提出主题

　　比如：

　　1.Recently with the development /advance/progress of science and technology, the phenomenon of pets has aroused wide concern.

　　2.Nowadays, it is undeniable that pets has almost become the biggest concern of the present-day world.

　　第二句话：翻译第一个提纲

　　比如：a part of citizens cling to the idea that keeping pets is beneficial to their daily life.

　　第三第四句话具体说明原委，为什么养宠物好

　　比如：

　　1.first, keeping pets can reduce the loneliness of many people ,especially the old and the children, who have to stay alone.

　　2.in addition, the pets are lovely, they can make you feel delighted when you go back to home.

　　第二段(34句话)

　　第一句话：过度语

　　比如：although the former is reasonable to some people, there are still these who claim that having animals at home is unacceptable.

　　第二句话：翻译第二个提纲

　　比如：they are of the opinion that keeping pets should be banned.

　　第三第四句话：说明原委，为什么养宠物不好。

　　比如：

　　1. On one hand, they will give rise to serious pollution, which exists not only at their onwersfamily but also the public places.

　　2. On the other hand. Not only will they be responsible for some injuries to the innocent children but also lead to some terrible noise which can be horrible at night.

　　三段(34句话)

　　第一句话翻译第三个提纲：

　　比如：Personally, I insist that keeping pets is a two-edged weapon which can be used for good or evil.

　　第二句话具体论述

　　比如I intend to stand on the side that pets is our friends, without them. We would witness a gloomy future.

　　第三句话总结：

　　In conclusion , it is high time we poured attention into the phenomenonfeeding pets.

　　这样，一篇观点对比性文章就写出来了。不管主题是什么，只需要变换一下中心词罢了。