六级写作高分常见错误（6）

　　5. 逻辑域错误。这个应该不难判断，但还是经常出错：

　　If people become friends, both of them wont care about money... [可改为neither of them care about money...]

　　其他：

　　语义重复

　　In my opinion, I agree with the view that... [agree一词本身就表示说话人的观点，可将In my opinion去掉，或把后面的一半改为the view that... is right]

　　share many common interests [common与share属同义反复，可改为have many common interests或share many interests]

　　论断过于绝对，缺乏足够思考

　　A person with good finance will not understand why his poor friend gets on a sardine-jam like bus and always choose to dine at some poor-condition restaurant at the roadsides... [相信富人也不至于笨到这个程度]

　　句义严重反复，缺乏变化

　　Some people believe that financial disparity affects friendship. Some believe that financial disparity doesnt affect friendship. For my part, I agree with the latter, because financial disparity doesnt affect friendship. [不必多说了]

　　连词错误

　　It is not difficult to imagine if those rich people have some poor friends with common interests. [if一词显然应该是that，不过更通顺的说法应该是It is not difficult to imagine rich people having some poor friends with similar interests.]

　　不会使用照应语

　　We wont ask people whether they have much money or not when making friends with other people. [people和other people显然应该是同指关系，后面的other people应改为them才对]

　　作文是对语言的综合运用，可以集中体现出学习者的基本功和思维能力;语感非常重要，不过要形成好的语感还需要长期的反复训练。过去指导英语专业大四学生毕业论文，每届都发现有不少已经过了TEM8的英语专业学生的语言能力有明显缺陷。写作能力必须建立在大量阅读、用心感受和无数次练习的基础上，对此曾对学生反复讲过多次，不过由于无法立竿见影，多数学生不能很好地坚持，很是遗憾。