12月大学英语六级考试作文点评（2）

　　在大学英语六级考试中，写作部分是不是会另很多同学头疼。不知如何下笔，写出来之后也不知道自己写的怎么样。为了让同学有更加清晰地写作思路，下面为为大家距离点评作文，希望能帮助到同学们。

　　Certificate craze

　　Recently the phenomenon of certificate craze has become a big concern of the public. It is also a new craze in the university, which seems like a routine activity on campus, for certificates do play a vital role when students look for a decent job.

　　Admittedly, there are different purposes behind this phenomenon. Some people aim at certificates because of the employment pressure. With the admission expansion of colleges, a great many graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market. So it is the certificates that can make them more competitive. However, some others consider all the diploma and certificates important standards by which a persons ability can be measured. They spare no effort to get the certificates for the sole purpose of proving that they are qualified in a certain field. Moreover, there are those who just want to enrich their life by preparing for the certificates because they really enjoy their progress.

　　From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates, since certificates do not necessarily prove ones ability. Being crazy in getting certifications blindly is nothing but wasting time. To conclude, we should focus on improving our ability but not merely getting a certificate.

　　文章点评：

　　本次六级作文探讨的是考生比较熟悉的话题高校考证书热;本次试题延续了以往的考试风格，关注点仍然放在与学生息息相关的话题上;从选题角度来说，考生还是比较好把握的。需要注意的是由于第二部分可能需要列出多点原因，考生在该部分需要注意论述的条理性;此外，在保证句法通顺的前提下，尽可能做到表达的多样化。

　　首先，在考生拿到题目的时候，应该先认真审题，心里大致对接下来文章的安排有一个底。提起证书热的话，很多考生都会联想到就业压力，学校给予的压力以及学生自身的需求;因此，全文可做如下安排;

　　第一段，考生可以整体阐述一下该话题，陈述下目前存在的考证热现象;

　　第二段，考生可以对考证热背后存在的各种各样的目的进行拓展;比如说由于日益严重的就业压力，以及有的学校时不时给学生灌输的压力;或者是学生自身从身边感受到的一些压力，都可能导致考证热的产生。

　　第三段要求考生对于该现象给出自己的理解，考生应在这里持一种客观的态度。因为考证本身并不是一种错误，但是考生应当注意从题目考证热出发，重点放在热字上，对这一现象做出最理性的评述。

　　综合来讲，本篇文章观点明确，思路清晰;在第二段给出的例证具有代表性;此外，文章中有用到不少的亮点词汇;唯一比较遗憾的是，由于时间和篇幅的限制，论证的展开还未完全挖掘出来，但在如此有限的条件下，可以称得上佳作了。