名师辅导：四六级写作结构与思路点拨

　　第一段：引语引用+简单评论段

　　1文章第一句话：直接引用引语

　　1.1.第一句的第一种写法：　名人名言

　　1 .Sb. once said.

　　2 Sb. once said， .

　　3 I assume that you are familiar with the words of sb. , who once said, .

　　我想你应该熟悉sb.说过的一句话，他曾经说过： .

　　1. 2第一句的第二种写法：　俗语/常言/习语/成语/谚语

　　1 As the commonly-heard saying/idiom/proverb goes， .

　　2 I assume that you are familiar with saying, which is commonly-heard , .

　　我想你应该熟悉一句耳熟能详的俗语/常言习语/谚语，是这么说的： .

　　2文章第二句话：简化引语+表层评论

　　2.1用自己的语言说明、解释抽象和凝练的引语，保持原意的同时，使之简洁易懂;

　　本句根据题目引语内容，自由发挥

　　2.2对引语的表层含义进行评论：就引语的事说事，不要上升到人生哲理高度

　　It is obvious that

　　文章第二句话写法真题举例：

　　Although four-hour seems to be quite a long time, it can help people chop down the tree more smoothly and less laboriously in the rest two hours. It is obvious that a full preparation can help people enhance the efficiency of trees-chopping.

　　Quitting smoking is so easy as long as you keep away from cigarettes. However, many people can hardly resist the temptation of cigarette and then give up their attempt to quit smoking. It is obvious that no one can quit smoking with ease without strong will and determination.

　　第二段：意义阐述段

　　3. 文章第三句话：由表及里，提炼挖掘引语的深层含义

　　3.1 The saying/proverb/ sbs remark aims at informing us of the significance of A.

　　3.2 Simple as the sentence may sound, it contains abundant life philosophy and informs us of the significance of A.

　　4. 文章第四句话： 强调A的重要性

　　4.1 There is no denying that we can not emphasize the importance of A too much.

　　4.2 why does A. play an indispensable role in our life/ work/ pursuit of success ?

　　5. 文章第五句话： 论述A的重要性

　　5.1 A will enable us to achieve our objectives more smoothly and realize their dreams more rapidly. The more Communicative/Modest/ Honest /Cooperative/ Inclusive we are, the more likely we are to build harmonious relationships and master more resources which is advantageous to their success.

　　两个衍生体：action plan

　　Action will enable us to achieve our objectives more smoothly and realize their dreams more rapidly. The more action we take, the more likely we are to accumulate experience, master skills and get close to our destination.

　　Making plan will enable us to achieve our objectives more smoothly and realize their dreams more rapidly. The more detailed plan we make , the more likely we are to make full use of time, enhance our work efficiency make full preparation for unexpected cases/

　　5.2 A is crucial for every individual. With its seemingly magic power, A can not only better accelerate individuals development, but serve as an efficient instrument for individuals to change the world.

　　5.3 Those who possess A are always admired and respected, because A may endow them with more competence, chances, self-confidence to overcome difficulties and approach challenges. Those people appear to possess a special charm, bringing to others hope, passion and surprise, and, thus winning others favor and trust.

　　6. 文章第六句话：举例论述A的重要性

　　6.1 Quite a few examples can be given to prove the importance of A. However, I can think of no better illustration than the following one:

　　6.2 To further demonstrate the importance of A, I would like to take sb. as a case in point.

　　举例公式：

　　Sb. ,插入语， how could he/she do sth. without A ?