Keep Our Hearts Strong
As the proverb goes, constant drops wear out the stone. Good habits help pave our way to success. However, during the cultivation of good habits we are frequently bewildered and baffled by temptations from the world around us. Only when we are alert and determined enough to resist these temptations can we take a right and unswerving road to success。
In our daily life, it is essential for us to be self-disciplined. A healthy lifestyle, which may consist of regular exercise and balanced diet, is what most people are pursuing in contemporary society. Yet many people cannot resist the coziness of staying in and temptation of tasty but fatty food, thus giving up half way cultivating healthy habits and getting decreasingly robust. In addition, our progress in academic performance depends on good habits. We must restrain ourselves from endless entertainment. Otherwise, distracted and indulged, we can never maintain a good learning habit, let alone achieve academic excellence。
In summary, good habits rely on strong hearts that are not disturbed by temptations. With persistence and perseverance, we are heading to success。
【点评】:
本次作文要求以Good habits result from resisting temptation。即良好的习惯源自抵制诱惑,这一谚语为话题发表议论,在写作时需要对谚语的寓意进行阐释,并且表达自己的观点和看法,相比更为常见的话题型和观点型作文题来说,有一定的难度。首先要求能够对谚语进行准确的理解,抓住谚语表达的中心意思,明确的提出观点,然后围绕这个意思进行阐述。所以在写作时需要强调抵制诱惑对于保持或者培养良好习惯的重要性,以这一论点进行展开阐述,注意行文的逻辑性和语言的准确、流畅。
雅思写作常用词汇:才能/潜质
雅思写作常用词汇:维系生命的
雅思写作论据:Tourism话题
雅思写作常用词汇:道德准则
雅思写作论据:Museums and Galleries话题
雅思写作常用词汇:同等地位的人/同辈/同事
雅思大作文满分标准解读
雅思写作模板会影响考试分数吗?
雅思写作辅导:词汇的运用和句子的处理
雅思写作常用词汇:利用/消除/排除
雅思写作常用词汇:事业/职业
雅思小作文满分标准解读
法律及犯罪类雅思写作考题的应对方法讲解
雅思写作评分标准诠释(Part Two)
雅思写作备考基础篇
活用雅思写作套句形成自己的写作模板
雅思写作常用词汇:低碳生活/经济
雅思写作水平测试(A类G类通用)
雅思写作常用词汇:使合适/定位
雅思信函写作开头常用的表达方式
雅思写作常用词汇:重视/实施/贯彻
雅思写作常用词汇:求职/求职者
雅思写作常用词汇:把责任归咎于
雅思属于生活类的考试 写作最忌硬套模板
雅思写作常用词汇:环境/环保论
雅思写作常用词组汇总
雅思写作常用词汇:可选择的/代替物
雅思写作教育类重点词汇整理
雅思写作实用词汇:文化多元化
雅思写作常用词汇:臭氧层
不限 |
英语教案 |
英语课件 |
英语试题 |
不限 |
不限 |
上册 |
下册 |
不限 |