成都卢析点评英语六级写作部分(附范文)

　　这几年大家谈论的热门话题考察的非常多，比如10年12月的高校排名，10年6月的中文关注度，08年12月的大学生心理健康，08年6月的电子书， 07年12月的数字产品，还有更早的05年的盗版产品等等，都是紧贴时代的步伐。所以大家一定要关注社会，融入社会，了解社会，对于社会热门话题一定要在平时就要多加思考，积累自己的想法。

　　很多考生看到这次六级考试的作文题目都笑了，笑得灿烂，笑得轻松，因为一看到是跟网络有关尤其是天天时时刻刻都在玩的博客或者微博就觉得想说的话立刻如泉涌。但是有两类考生也会想哭，一类是知道什么是博客，但是不知道blog为何物的天才童鞋，还有一类是能读懂题目，也有话如泉涌但是想说的都是中文却不知道如何表达成英文的筒子。

　　这个题目要得高分，要注意以下几点：

　　一是在首段要就要发表自己的看法，表达自己对于网络的明确观点和态度，因为这个题目可以归于六级写作题型的对立观点题型，也就是说可以写成支持网络交流，也可以反对网络交流。

　　二是在第二段的主体段把正反两面的观点都写出来，好处和坏处，然后用简单的小例子进行论证。网络交流的好处就是消除距离，交流方便，比如可以经常和在国外的亲戚和同学进行网络聊天，或者通过围脖等随时知道自己关注的名人的动向;坏处就是让人尤其是青少年失去交流技巧，人际关系疏远等等。比如自己周围的同学就有很多在网上可以和陌生人打的火热，但是生活中不想或者不知道和家人聊什么，就像漫画中的父女一样。

　　三是总结段言简意赅，重复自己在第一段中表达的观点，到底对于漫画中的情况是褒大于贬还是贬大于褒。

　　四是注意词汇的变换和句式的变换。比如多用强调句，倒装句，双重否定句，虚拟语气等等，这些都是高分的保障。

　　下面提供一篇文章仅供参考：

　　The impact of the Internet on interpersonal communication

　　It seems that most young people including me feel acquainted and familiar with the conversation in the picture, when a dad asks his daughter how was school today?， his daughter would rather tell her father to read all about it on her blog than inform him face to face. Common as this situation is, it should never be advocated among youngsters. (倒装句)

　　The impacts of the internet on interpersonal communication are seen as both positive and negative. No one can deny that (双重否定句)internet offers us convenient communication in spite of time and distance. If we want to contact our relatives or friends abroad, on line chatting systems will be the smart choice; or if we are curious about the current situation of some celebrities, blogs, mini-blogs, MSN can be our helpers. On the other hand, it is the on line communication that prevents people especially the teens from face to face communication so that they gradually lose their capability to communicate in real life.(强调句) For example, many students have no troubles to make friends via internet, talking to strangers smoothly but they have no idea as to how to start a conversation with strangers or do not want to talk to their families, just like the situation shown in the picture.

　　Internet, from my perspective, does impose harm on our interpersonal communication.(强调句)It is imperative that we should figure out some ways to improve the situation and rescue teenagers communication skills.