2015年6月英语六级写作常见错误分析(11)

作文在英语四六级考试中占据百分之十五的比重，也是大家考前冲刺最有效果的一部分，此时不冲更待何时?下面为大家整理了2015年6月大学英语六级写作常见错误分析，供广大考生参考使用。

　　Exercise W2?

　　The following topic sentences are only examples. Your sentences may be different.

　　1. This is a strong topic sentence.?

　　2. This is a weak topic sentence because the rest of the paragraph

　　describes what the writer does when he or she goes to the beach. A better topic sentence would be: Whenever I have the opportunity to go to the beach, I always follow the same routine.?

　　3. This is a weak topic sentence because the rest of the paragraph describes the various ways students can get to class. A better topic sentence would be: For the many students who cannot afford a car, there are several alternative ways of getting to class.?

　　Exercise W3

　　These are only examples. Your topic sentences may be different.??

　　1. A dormitory room is cold and impersonal until several changes have been made to make it more inviting.?

　　2. American telephone books are divided into several sections.?

　　3. The fast-food restaurant has become popular for various reasons.?