第一部分、四级作文:记叙文题型作文DIY写作步骤
要求考生写一篇记叙文,描述事件发生的时间、地点、原因、人物及结果,最后对事件进行简单分析,
对这类题型,通常分为三个步骤来写:
第一段、总结描述
交代清楚故事涉及的人物、时间、地点:
主题句
第二段、具体描述
具体描述事件发生的原因、经过和结果
起因+经过+结果
第三段、对事件的分析
分析句1+分析句2+分析3
第二部分、记叙文题型作文DIY写作范文练习
[实战演练]
Directions:For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Day My Classmate Fell Ill.
1、简单描述一下这位同学生病的情况;
2、同学、老师和我是如何帮助他的;
3、人和人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是....
[DIY写作模板:架构阶段]
第一段:
开篇句:About _____ Oclock one evening in _______, _____.
扩展句:________.
第二段:
主题句:Without hesitation, _____. It wasnt long before _____.
扩展句:1、One ______.
2、Another _______.
3、Our teacher _______.
第三段:
结尾句:Is _______? Who can tell ? But ______.
扩展句:1、When ____ , people showed _____ spirit regardless of ____.
2、This kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice.
3、And it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.
[DIY写作模板:填充阶段]
第一段:
开篇句:Aboutnine Oclock one evening inMay, my roommate Li Ming was lying in bed, trembling with cold and having a cough.
扩展句:His head was aching so intensely that he kept groaning. His forehead felt very hot.We took his temperature. It was 38.5℃.
第二段:
主题句:Without hesitation, I dialed 120. It wasnt long before an ambulance arrived.
扩展句:1、One roommate brought a blanket for him.
2、Another supported him in the ambulance.
3、Our teacher insisted on giving him some money.
第三段:
结尾句:Ishe a suspedted SARS patient? Who can tell ? Butwedidt retreat.
扩展句:1、Whenthe savage SARS was spreading,people showedfearless spirit regardless of dangers to their own health.
2、This kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice.
3、And it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.
第三部分、范文
About nine Oclock one evening in May, my roommate Li Ming was lying in bed, trembling with cold and having a cough.His head was aching so intensely that he kept groaning. His forehead felt very hot. We took his temperature. It was 38.5℃.
Without hesitation, I dialed 120. It wasnt long before an ambulance arrived. One roommate brought a blanket for him. Another supported him in the ambulance. Our teacher insisted on giving him some money.
Is he a suspedted SARS patient? Who can tell ? But we didt retreat. When the savage SARS was spreading, people showed fearless spirit regardless of dangers to their own health.This kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice.And it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.
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