写作中阅卷人喜欢的句式有以下两种:一是插入语;二是倒装。
第一,插入语。
所谓插入语,英语中有两种形式。一种是有两个逗号之间引起的成分称之为插入语;第二种是有两个半破折号引起的成分称之为插入语。如下所示:
Jinan, the Spring City, is a famous tourist city.
Other people may give us instrumental supportfinancial aid, material resources, and needed servicesthat reduces stress by helping us resolve and cope with our problems.
插入语的作用主要有两个,一个是突出主语,比如说:He, who would like to play basketball, is a good student.
第二个作用是解释说明,比如说:People, especially students, should work hard.
第二,倒装
倒装是我们写作中需要用到的。虽然略显俗套,但是却是很能满足阅卷人的主观感受的。常用的倒装形式有以下几种:
Only + 时间状语
Only when all of us join in the efforts of eliminating cheating at all levels can we expect to have a cleaner society and a more beautiful future.
Only + 介词词组
Only by planning his he improve efficiency and make achievements.
Only in this way can we master the writing skills step by steps.
否定词位于句首
在我一生当中很难遇到这样的人
Seldom in my life have I met such a kind-hearted man.
地点方位名词位于句首
In no other place in the world can one find such enthusiasm for applying for hosting the 2008 Olympic Games.
第三,修辞
无论是汉语写作还是英语写作,修辞其实非常的重要。它是作者写作功底具体事例地展现。所谓修辞包括比喻、拟人、排比等等。英语写作中的修辞问题我已经专门写过一篇文章。这里仅举一个比喻例子,还是拿重要的来举例。当你用完词组之后,如果你用上下面比如句子,则文章就会显得神采飞扬,试比较:
The bicycle is important for us.
The bicycle is of importance for us.
The bicycle plays an important role in our life.
The bicycle, environmental friendliness vehicle, plays an important role in our life.
The bicycle is like the air, water, and sunshine and cannot be parted with a moment in our life.
那么很明显,最后一个句子是我们最终拿到考场上去搏击高分的句子。
第四,平时要注意积累
很多考生为了写好作文也作了好多工作,课下也付出了很多,包括背诵大量的文章等等,但是提笔写作时候,仍不见的有所改观。问题在哪里呢?
我认为,很多考生虽然也背诵文章,但却只是死记硬背。如果合上书本让他复述,他们就会卡壳。就是茶壶里煮饺子,倒不出来。我们说背诵是个输入的过程,出的过程。我们真正需要的是把平时积累的随时随地用在我们的写作中。因此,我们在注重积累的同时,一定在平时练习的时候,把他们多家运用。只有多练多用,才能真正达到学以致用,才能真正提高写作水平。
我们的长江 Our Changjing River
日记荒谬的一天 Diary—An Absurd Day
做一个乐观的人To Be an Optimistic Person
拯救地球 Saving Our Earth
课本应该被循环再用吗?Textbooks Should Be Recycled?
邀请信 An Invitation
羽毛球 Badminton
幸运号码真的能带来好运吗?Do Lucky Numbers Really Bring Good Luck?
给爸爸妈妈的信 A Letter to My Parents
校运动会School Sports Meeting
学习知识要讲究方法 Approaches to Knowledge
父爱Father Love
关于复习的建议My Suggestions about Revision
学校生活的一天-One day of school life
英语的重要性 The Importance of English
季节The Seasons
我对学生使用手机的看法My view on Using Mobile Phones
我的选择 My Choice
性格Personality
友情Friendship
我的梦想是成为一名医生My Dream is to be a Doctor
家的重要性The Importance of Family
兴趣是最好的老师Interest Is the Best Teacher
报纸与网络的比较The Comparation of Newspaper and Internet
汽车与环境空气污染Car and Pollution
No Breakfast No Good 不吃早餐不好
谈军训 On Military Training
我最喜欢的城市my favourite city
一封关于如何学好中文的信 A letter on how to learn Chinese
时尚与潮流 Fashion and Trends
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