附范文及作文解析

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Online Shopping. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:

　　1. 现在网上购物已成为一种时尚

　　2. 网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题

　　3. 我的建议

　　Online Shopping

　　Nowadays, with the rapid development of information technology, online shopping has gained great popularity among more and more web users. For example, it is fashionable for youngsters to purchase daily essentials, such as books, clothes, electrical equipment, on some famous website, like Taobao, EBay and Alibaba.

　　Undoubtedly speaking, online shopping has many advantages. Firstly, compared with traditional shopping, it s very convenient. What you need to do is just clicking your mouse and waiting instead of going out by foot or driving. Secondly, more choices than real store are another attraction to customers. However, in spite of convenience and more choices of online shopping, we cannot turn a blind eye to its disadvantages. Obviously, quality problem is its first disadvantage. It s common that articles aren t so good just as they are described online that customers always buy fake commodities. In addition, it s troublesome and annoying for many customers to make a change when they are not satisfied with what they bought online.

　　As a college student, I like online shopping but I expected that effective measures should be taken to make it better。Specifically speaking, government should work out strict regulations and rules to prevent unfaithful and unlawful activities of online shop owners. Only by this way can online shopping become really safe and attract an increasing number of customers.

　　此次考试的作文题目为Online shopping，是一个考生们相当熟悉的话题，这也沿袭了四级考试贴近学生生活的特点，相信考生一定会觉得有话可说。

　　从题材上来看，此次作文属于校园生活类

　　，题材上属于议论文，命题类型是现象解释型，这与2006年新题型，2007年12月以及2009年6月是同一类型的，考生考前若能掌握了写作模板，写好这篇文章应该不难。主要写作思路如下：

　　第一段应该是现象引入段，主要①描述现象，引起话题;②表现较为典型的一个方面;

　　③进一步阐述现象。

　　第二段是说明原因段，主要①承上启下,解释这一现象的原因一;②原因二;③原因三;

　　④重申观点，总结上述观点。

　　第三段是总结观点段，主要①讲述导致的结果;②作者的态度;③原因一;④原因二;⑤总结全文。

　　下面是文都四六级精品图书《大学英语四级考试三层突破 写作 完形 翻译》中 现象解释型 的模板，请同学们对照一下：

　　第一段：Nowadays, there exists a public controversy concerning the issue of引出现象.What amazes us most is典型的一个方面.It is true that进一步阐述现象.

　　第二段：Many reasons account for 这一现象The main reason is原因一.What is more, 原因二. Thirdly, 原因三.

　　第三段：As a result,总结上述观点.Considering all these, 讲述导致结果及作者态度.For one thing, 原因一. For another, 原因二.In conclusion,总结全文.

　　通过对比，大家对自己此次作文的写作是否满意呢?可见，考前多看书、多练习，对于过关得高分还是很有必要的。要相信： 一分耕耘，一分收获 。