201大学英语四级冲刺之写作强化训练四

　　附：重点话题与句型

　　1) With more emphasis put on building a harmonious society, people begin to realize the importance of solving the problem of inequality

　　2) Since sustainable development is our main goal, we should pay more attention to striking a balance between economic development and environmental protection

　　3) As the central task of our country is to build a well-off society in an all-round way, more efforts are being made to improve the living standards of the people

　　4) With the rapid growth of our economy , an increasing number of problems have arisen, such as

　　5) With the rapid development of science and technology , more and more people come to realize that

　　6) Currently, there is a widespread concern over high unemployment rate .

　　7) Nowadays, a heated debate about private cars is under way in China.

　　8) As the public awareness of market economy heightens,

　　9) Unless we put more emphasis on environmental protection , the problem will be a hindrance to our building a harmonious society.

　　10) Different people hold different views on accession to WTO . Some are in favor of, while others are against

　　11) The case only reveals the tip of an ugly iceberg of serious environmental pollution

　　12) When it comes to the problem of eating wild animals

　　13) As far as family planning is concerned, there is much room for improvement.

　　14) All these statistics reveal a painful fact that corruption is spreading rapidly in our country

　　15) Without love, my classmate Xiao Wang would have died in the hospital. But with our love and care, he survived the illness and can enjoy his life now.

　　16) Without computers , it would be difficult to imagine modern life.

　　17) It is imperative for us to take effective measures to correct the situation

　　18) The participating Slogan should be an embodiment of the concept of Green Olympics, Hi-Tech Olympics and Peoples Olympics with Peoples Olympics as its highlight and should reflect the unique cultural background and humanism of China and Beijing.

　　19) Let us work hand in hand to solve this problem

　　20) We should do our best in eliminating industrial pollution

　六.Post-writing:

　　第一步集中在语法上：

　　1) 每个句子是否都有谓语动词;

　　2) 动词的时态和语态;

　　3) 主谓搭配是否恰当;

　　4) 代词与其指代的事物是否一致;

　　5) 标点符号。

　　第二步在拼写上

　　常见错误举例：

　　1) 无主语

　　 After graduated from university, I began to work in a company.

　　 Do you know why must protect our environment?

　　 Have you seen a man without enough food but had a healthy body?

　　2) 无主谓结构

　　 For another reason. When we have a vacation, it will be convenient to ride a bike.

　　 Lived in the country, no loud noise, no dirty air, but quiet and fresh.

　　3) 无连接词

　　 But a person has not enough food, he will not have a healthy body.

　　 China is a developing country, most people cannot afford a car yet.

　　4) 主语使用错误

　　 Rich doesnt mean a happy life.

　　 Without a friend will feel alone.

　　 However, making friends should be careful.

　　5) there be用法错误

　　 There are many students read books in the classroom.

　　 There are few person can afford a car in our country.

　　 There are many things must be done to deal with energy crisis.

　　6) 举例用法错误

　　 We should take some sports. For example, football, basketball and so on.

　　7) 不完全句

　　 Nowadays, if you want to find a job. Then you must pass the College English Test.

　　8) 分词使用错误

　　 Comparing with other countries, China pays little attention to the energy problem.

　　 Looking at from above, this picture gives us an image of a lion.

　　9)单词用法错误