大学英语四六级考试作文冲刺点拨助你拿高分

　　四六级考试越来越使模板无用武之地，阅卷老师在阅卷的过程中最多的是关注同学们的用词和句型的使用。

　　高分作文标志

　　1：四级120-150字;六级150180字;

　　2、是否长短句交叉;

　　3、用词是否恰当，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;

　　4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词;

　　下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：

　　1.适当用被动代替主动，这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要总是用we / I 举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is, therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.

　　2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。

　　如however / therefore /for example/I believe做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。

　　比如说：Other individuals, however, take the attitude that

　　3.一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的代替太宽泛的。比如上面例子中，applicable代替proper, approaches代替ways, implement代替carry out, sharpen ones competitive edge代替enhance ones

　　competitiveness

　　下面举一篇我六级班上一位同学写的优秀作文的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。

　　Computer and I ----by Simmy

　　I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in googling an army of useful information I had expected, and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.

　　exceedingly替换very

　　thrilling替换exciting

　　sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb替换sb. be interested in sth.

　　google替换search

　　an army of替换a lot of

　　The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!

　　The dawn of the new century witnessed是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;

　　Increasing popularity替换more and more popular

　　Coincident with非常地道的词汇，表达与一致的意思，替换With

　　Advancement替换development

　　Pour into 替换enter into

　　Current 替换now

　　Appeal to sb.替换sb. be interested in sth.

　　Growing individuals替换more and more people

　　It is no exaggeration to say经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的

　　For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment. Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.

　　For a start替换To begin with

　　We can, freely, search用了插入语的写作手法

　　our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被动

　　Additionally替换In addition / Besides

　　Deliver替换send

　　There is no denying that, however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen, which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.

　　There is no denying that, however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings,这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型，还有however作为插入语，function in the disservice of替换do harm to

　　Emerging代替appearing

　　Net citizen网民，属于精彩用词

　　As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should, therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.

　　No garden has no weeds替换Every coin has two sides

　　Computers do play，do强调

　　Positive替换important / good等

　　A slice of替换a part of

　　Unfavorable替换bad

　　Impacts替换effects / influences

　　We should, therefore, take advantage of使用插入语

　　Fruits 替换advantage

　　Facet替换aspect

　　各位同学，上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点，作文怎么会不得高分呢!

　　以下是30个最经典的替换词，各位同学可以参考一下。

　　1.individuals,characters, folks代替

　　2: positive, favorable, rosy，promising，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding代替good

　　3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse代替bad，如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive代替

　　e.g. An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation, as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.

　　4.代替many.

　　注：用many, if not most一定要小心，many后一定要有词。

　　E.g. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that.同理用most, if not all ,代替most.

　　5: a slice of, quiet a few , several代替some

　　6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that,hold the view that, it is widely shared that,it is universally acknowledged that)替think

　　7:affair ,business ,matter代替thing

　　8: shared代common

　　9.reap huge fruits代替get much benefit )

　　10:for my part ,from my own perspective代替in my opinion

　　11:Increasing,growing代替more and more

　　27. interaction代替communication

　　28.frown on sth代替be against , disagree with sth

　　29.to name only a few, as an example代替for example

　　30. next to/virtually impossible,代替nearly impossible