gre argument205提纲分析汇总

　　前段时间为gre考生汇总了gre issue写作提纲思路和分析，希望对考生在攻破gre issue写作上有所帮助。接下来的几天我们将为gre考生整理gre argument部分的提纲内容。希望通过我们的整理和汇总，让gre考生真正能掌握gre写作的精髓。

　　题目题材：社会治安

　　gre argument 205题目：

　　The following appeared in a recommendation from the president of Amburgs Chamber of Commerce.

　　Last October the city of Belleville installed high intensity lighting in its central business district, and vandalism there declined almost immediately. The city of Amburg has recently begun police patrols on bicycles in its business district but the rate of vandalism there remains constant. Since high intensity lighting is apparently the most effective way to combat crime, we should install such lighting throughout Amburg. By reducing crime in this way, we can revitalize the declining neighborhoods in our city.

　　提纲：

　　The president unfairly assumes that it is the installation of high intensity lighting that resulted in the decline in vandalism in Belleville.

　　Belleville and Amburg might not be comparable at many aspects.

　　The author fails to point out in what places do most vandalism at Amburg take place, thus we cannot evaluate if the police patrols are ineffective.

　　The president ignores many other effective ways to combat crime.

　　The president fails to consider the cost of installing high intensity lighting throughout Amburg and if we could afford it.

　　Granted that installing such lighting could reduce vandalism, the necessity of installing the lighting all over Amburg is open to doubt.

　　Granted that installing such lighting could reduce vandalism, we cannot guarantee that it would deter other types of crimes since vandalism is not the only type of crime in Amburg.

　　The president unfairly assumes that the proposed actions would sufficiently guarantee revitalization of city neighborhoods.

　　注：题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。

　　无论是gre issue还是gre argument，考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性，而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。