gre argument200提纲分析汇总

　　前段时间为gre考生汇总了gre issue写作提纲思路和分析，希望对考生在攻破gre issue写作上有所帮助。接下来的几天我们将为gre考生整理gre argument部分的提纲内容。希望通过我们的整理和汇总，让gre考生真正能掌握gre写作的精髓。

　　题目题材：医疗，经营

　　gre argument 200题目：

　　Statistics collected from dentists indicate that three times more men than women faint while visiting the dentist. This evidence suggests that men are more likely to be distressed about having dental work done than women are. Thus, dentists who advertise to attract patients should target the male consumer and emphasize both the effectiveness of their anesthetic techniques and the sensitivity of their staff to nervous or suffering patients .

　　提纲：

　　Without the base amount of male and female patients respectively, we cannot assess which group is more likely to be distressed.

　　The author fails to describe the detailed circumstances when those patients faint, thus we could not evaluate the argument.

　　The times of people faint are not a good indication of whether people are distressed.

　　The author ignores the negative effects of advertisement which focusing on the male consumers.

　　The author fails to consider what fraction of all patients are likely to be nervous or suffering, and how many consumers really care about their anesthetic techniques and sensitivity.

　　The author ignores many important features of a dentist which could also attract patients.

　　The proposed advertising techniques might have the opposite effectby calling attention to the very sorts of images that cause distress and fainting.

　　注：题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。

　　无论是gre issue还是gre argument，考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性，而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。