Ⅹ. 书面表达(共15分)
为了使同学们更加健康快乐地成长,学校决定向同学们征求建议。假如你是刘波,用英语向校长写一篇80个词左右的建议信。注意:文中应包含所有要点,并适当发挥;不能出现真实的校名和姓名。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Headmaster,
Im very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions. First, I hope our school will
Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter!
Yours sincerely,
Liu Bo
Ⅹ. 书面表达(共15分) One possible version:
Dear Headmaster,
Im very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions. First, I hope our school will open the library more often. Second, I think our school can organize more after-class activities. Next I hope our school will give us more time for sports, art and music. And I suggest our school should organize fewer exams as well.
As for our teachers, I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting. And if they can talk less but more clearly in class, we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practice. Whats more, I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time.
Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter!
Yours sincerely,
Liu Bo
书面表达评分标准
一、内容要点:
1. Our school will open the library more often .
2. Our school can organize more after-class activities.
3. Our school can give us more time for sports
4. Our school should organize fewer exams.
5. Our teachers will make classes more interesting
6. Our teachers will talk less but more clearly in class.
7. Our teachers will give us less homework and finish class on time
二、本大题总分为15分,按五个档次给分
第一档(1415分)能写明全部要点,语言基本无误,行文连贯,表达清楚。
第二档(1113分)能写明大部分要点,语言有少量错误,行文比较连贯,表达比较清楚。
第三档(810分)能写明部分要点,语言有较多错误,行文不太连贯,但尚能表达意思。
第四档(57分)能写明少部分或个别要点,语言错误较多,只有个别句子可读、可看懂。
第五档(04分)基本上没有写出内容要点,语言错误多,只有一些词汇堆积, 不知所云。
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