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The opinion of volunteer

发布时间：2016-02-29 编辑：查字典英语网小编

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The Volunteer is a very wonderful and significant occupation in our daily life . There is no doubt that it is meaningful. Thus,I think itis good to be a volunteer to help others who gets into trouble.

But someone in the society thinks that it is awastes of our time to be a volunteer. Maybe, something else is better worthdoing, we would rather earn more money than be a voluntary people. It is no good being a volunteer.they said.

To be honest, I do not agree with their views. Obviously, they are too selfish to face the life they are owning now. In my opinion ,To be a volunteer isa good wayfor us to enioy the colorful life , it whichis good for you, good for me and good for everyone. Think it over, my friends. To be a volunteer is not only enrichs our life ,but also help usmake many friends with others. Therefore, please do not act from selfish motives.

The important old chinese saying tells us that GOOD MIND,GOOD FIND. I think that it will be with you if you ambition your value of your life.

本文讨论了参与是否参与志愿工作的话题，从正反两个方面来论证，论点清晰，结构清楚。引入-反驳-论证-升华的套路放在这里很实用，希望继续发扬。但是用词较为生硬，有少量语法错误，希望继续改进。

Jack 张

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Jack张，（查看Jack张老师介绍课堂实拍），老师人称杰克船长（Captain Jack），毕业于北京大学，有独特的英语学习方法和备考参考技巧。张老师上课非常有激情，善于调动课堂的气氛和学生的积极性，有极强的责任感。所教导的学生无不成绩大幅提高，并真正爱上了英语学习。

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