托福写作想获得高分一直都不容易,这就更需要同学们付出更多的努力。以下是新东方在线为同学们整理的托福写作9大注意事项,供各位考生参考。
1.托福作文就是英文的八股,有套路,所以模板用得上。
2.词汇和固定短语要识记,主要是3类: ~环境的,经济的,社会进步等题目经常涉及的名词或者名词短语;~表示程度等的形容词和能够恰当修饰动词的副词;~起承转合作用的连接词和短语。
3.在正确,易懂的基础上,力求句型的变化多端,插入语,从句,倒装,虚拟等。
4.看清题目要求写什么,有比较的,要写出两者的不同,不要只说你支持的。
5.不同的reason不要糅合到一块去,每段中心要明确,且reason段落,要用英文写作的方式,开门见山的在段落开头指出;既然要成段,那么你 所选择的reason一定要能扩展,也就是有东西好写,不要为赋新辞强说愁;所以虽然一个论点你可能有N个理由,但那些很有道理,但是你用英文无法表达清 楚的,就不用写了,这不是上万字的论文。
6.reason一出就要有example,两三个case足以,并且事例逻辑上能够支持原因。
7.整篇文章不要出现第二人称you,your,这是enjoylife等前辈的指点(指点了pumpkin,然后她又数落我的),多用people;你想,you就是阅卷人,你凭什么张口就用人家的书面语言教导人家呢?
8.个人的观点:尽可能的避免单独使用he/she,考虑到性别歧视问题。但是,如果你要顶字数的话,也请用 he or she 。
9.口语化是初级者的大问题之一,写作文的时候往往是先想中文改怎么说,然后做个翻译工作;本来对非母语就很能驾驭,这样一来,说大白话,就直接导致句式的单一;所以还是要看看真题阅读文章的文法。
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