浙江省2017高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（）10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
例如：
It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily I was completely free then,
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so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8p.m. in Friday on evening.
第四节：作文 （满分30分）
假设你是高中生李华，有感于校园中存在的上课使用手机的行为，请用英语给校长写一封100-120个词的信。信中应包括以下内容：
1.说明写信目的；
2.对这种行为进行评论；
3.提出建议
注意：信的抬头、落款及信的第一句已给出（不计词数）。
Nov.19, 2011
Headmaster,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Senior 3._____________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________
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Your faithfully,
Li Hua
In China children are the centre of each family. All parents wish their children, especial senior high
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students, can go to top universities and have a bright future. So they always expect their children∧ make
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full use of their time to study. They don’t allow them to watch TV, playing computer games or go out to
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play with their friends .Some students just complained that their parents are only concerned about their
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grade and not their other needs.
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In my opinion, our parents are responsible for us. Perhaps they are sometimes too strict to us，but what
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they are doing is out of nothing but love. The most important thing, I think, is what we should learn to
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communicate with them. Find the right time for the talk, telling them that you’ll never let them down
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and will work harder to earn trust or respect from them.
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