2016高三英语一轮（外研版）复习：写作进行时2

　　第三部分　写作进行时()

　　(一)

　　(2017·福建)

　　孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题，现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面的漫画，按要求用英文写一篇短文。

　　内容要求：

　　1．描述漫画内容；

　　2．分析漫画所揭示的问题；

　　3．提出你的看法。

　　注意：

　　1．短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；

　　2．考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯；

　　3．词数120左右；

　　4. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息。

　　参考词汇：铺路 pave the way

　　From the picture, we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. ___________

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　　参考范文：

　　From_the_picture_we_can_see_a_family_of_three_walking_on_a_long_red_carpet.The son, well dressed, waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet, sweating.

　　It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, shouldering the hope of their parents. Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success. As a consequence, children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas.

　　Such a situation is of great concern. In my opinion, overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for children's development. Instead of doing everything for them, parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves. Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful.

　　(二)

　　(2017·山东)

　　某英文报社组织主题为“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活动，你有意参加。请从下面两句谚语中任选一句作为标题写一篇英语作文，内容须包括：1. 该谚语的含义；2. 体现该谚语含义的个人经历。

　　①A friend in need is a friend indeed.

　　②Where there's a will, there's a way.

　　注意： 1. 词数： 120～150；

　　2. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。

　　参考词汇： 谚语 proverb

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　　参考范文：

　　A friend in need is a friend indeed

　　My favourite proverb is A friend in need is a friend indeed.

　　It means that when your friend is in trouble , you should try your best to help her or him out. In other words , whenever your friend meets with difficulties , it's your duty to lend him /her a hand.

　　To be honest , the time when I really realized the meaning of the proverb is in 2001 when I was 13 years old. Unluckily , I broke my left leg and couldn't move at all , so it's impossible for me to attend my classes . And I missed so many lessons that I was left behind by others when I returned to school. However , it's my dear friend Ann that helped me by doing homework together with me after school .Of course , I made great progress at last . And without Ann's help , I would not have achieved my goal then .

　　All in all , just as the proverb goes , “A friend in need is a friend indeed , we should lend a hand to our friends without hesitation.”