书面表达专题卷5
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写作（共两节，满分40分）
第一节 基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）
你是2010广州亚运会官方网站英文版的小记者，,最近你采编一些关于修复广州城隍庙的情况，请就此写一篇采访报道。
[写作内容]
修复广州城隍庙（the Restoration of the Guangzhou Chenghuang Temple）
地理位置 位于广州市中山四路忠佑街
基本情况 始建于明洪武三年(1370年)，当时岭南地区最大庙宇，广州城标志性建筑，(landmark building),也是清代”羊城八景”之一。
目前现状 年久失修，破损不堪，多数建筑已被拆毁。
修复规划 为迎接亚运，市政府拟投资500万，2010亚运会前修复其主体建筑。
[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。
[评分标准]
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
1．简单介绍此现象；
2．你对此现象的看法：
（1）通宵排队不值得；
（2）影响白天的学习效率。
3．你的建议（学校和学生两个方面）……
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：有空调的air-conditioned 效率efficiency
3．书面表达（满分25分）
中国小伙
【注意】
字数100-120
4．Film or book, which do you prefer?”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英文短文：
1.看电影的好处
2.读原著的好处
3.我的看法及理由
注意：1.词数100～120，文章题目和开头已给出（不计词数）
2.参考词汇：(the) original work 或(the) book in the original
重要要求：
1.注意书法，书法分4分；
2.句式要求：文中要有一句话使用从句、倒装或者强调句；有一句话使用非谓语。每句话3分，共计6分，请考生在自己作文中的这两句话下面下划线，如果全文无下划线的句子，则以0分记入作文总分；
3.作文内容分：15分。
Film or book, which do you prefer
Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.
5．作为中学生,你肯定经历过多次考试,体验过成功,也遭遇过失败。请你根据提示内容，简要阐述中学生中普遍存在的考试失败的两种态度，并结合自身实际，说明你的观点。
消极态度 积极态度
你的态度
当考试结果不尽如人意时，情绪低落，丧失信心，不再继续努力 当考试失败时，…… ……
注意: 词数：120左右
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6．假如你是李华。你的好友王楠因不擅长与别人交流，感到非常痛苦。最近，他来信向你求助。请你根据以下提示给他写一封回信。主要内容应包括：
我们周围不擅长交流的人挺多的，劝他不必为此事苦恼;
告诉他与别人有效地交流是很重要的。与他人搞好关系，可以有助于我们的学习，还能增加成功的机会；
就如何改变目前的情况给他提出至少两点建议。
注意：1. 字数：100字左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 信的开头结尾已给出，不计入总字数。
Dear Wang Nan,
I know you are feeling annoyed these days because____________________________
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All the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案
1． One possible version：
The Restoration of the Guangzhou Chenghuang Temple
The Guangzhou Chenghuang Temple is located in the Zhongyou Street, Zhongshan 4th Road. It was built in 1370, the 3rd year of the Hongwu Period of the Ming Dynasty, and was the largest Chenghuang Temple of its time in the Lingnan Region. It was also seen as a landmark building of Guangzhou and was noted as one of the “Yangcheng Eight Scenic Spots” in the Qing Dynasty.
However, due to long years’ lack of repairs and protection, the temple is now shabby and broken and many of its buildings have been pulled down. Happily, to welcome the 2010 Asian Games, the city government has decided to invest 5 million yuan for its restoration, the main building of which is to be completed before the 2010 Asian Games are held.
【解析】
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【解析】略
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One possible version:
Film or book, which do you prefer?
Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow.
Some others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.
Personally, I agree with the second view. Actually I have more reasons for it. I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and what's more, I am able to better understand the author's ideas. In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.
【解析】
试题分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常简单，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。内容要求写议论文1.看电影的好处；2.读原著的好处；3.我的看法及理由。句式要求：文中要有一句话使用从句、倒装或者强调句；有一句话使用非谓语。写作前应该看清题目的要求，分析时态和人称。同时还应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，并注意了句子的衔接如：Besides，PersonallyWhat’s more 等等。
考点：提纲作文。
We high school students have taken many tests and exams, which brought us not only the joy of success, but the frustration of failure as well. Different students may take the failures with different attitudes.
Some will lose heart and no longer study as hard as before. But most students take an active attitude towards it. They encourage themselves to be self-confident. In most cases, the students will turn to the experienced teachers and advisers, who can help them out with their own life stories or their experience. These students will benefit a lot from the failure by regaining the courage and the confidence in the end.
In my opinion, failure is the mother of success. Every great man failed many times before they succeeded eventually.
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇提纲式作文，要点以表格形式给出，内容与考生的日常生活非常接近，关于考试失败的两种态度，考生有话可说。要点都已经给了出来。只是需要考生就自己的态度发表看法，要使用一些好的句式如the students will turn to the experienced teachers and advisers, who can help them out with their own life stories or their experience.,在个人看法部分可以使用一些谚语如：failure is the mother of success.来提升文章的档次。还要用合适的连接词把各要点连接成完整的文章，
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Dear Wang Nan,
I know you are feeling annoyed these days because you are not able to communicate with others effectively. It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on it.
As a saying goes, every man has his faults. I notice some people around us are also not good at communication. So you don’t have to worry too much about it. Of course, good communication is of great importance for us to create a pleasant relationship with others, which can not only be helpful to our study but also increase our chance of success. That is why I would like to make a few suggestions to you.
First of all, be honest and frank to those whom you talk to so as to be understood easily by others. Second, be aware of what you want to say and express yourself clearly. What’s more, you’d better try to understand others when they talk so that you can exchange ideas with them freely.
I hope my advice will be of great help to you.
All the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，而且很具体，考生要把要点解释清楚，不能有遗漏。除了表达这些要点以外，还要给出自己的建议，这就要求考生自己拓展发挥，在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。
【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，运用了一些词组和句子：of great help to对…有帮助，not only…but also…，不但…而且…， be aware of 意识到，It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on it.这句话用了it做形式主语， As a saying goes, every man has his faults. 这句话用了非限制性定语从句，Of course, good communication is of great importance for us to create a pleasant relationship with others, which can not only be helpful to our study but also increase our chance of success. 这句话用了定语从句，That is why I would like to make a few suggestions to you.这句话用了表语从句， be honest and frank to those whom you talk to so as to be understood easily by others.这句话用了定语从句， be aware of what you want to say and express yourself clearly. 这句话用了宾语从句， you’d better try to understand others when they talk so that you can exchange ideas with them freely.这句话用了结果状语从句。还有文章还使用了First of all, Second, What’s more,这样的关联词，使文章更加连贯。
考点：考查提纲类书面表达