第十五周 提纲作文
[学审题谋篇]
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(2016·潍坊市高考模拟)假定你是李华，正在新西兰学习。你计划寒假期间去当地旅行，请用英文写一封email向旅行社询问相关的旅行信息。要点如下：
1．旅行信息(如景点等)；2.当地特色(如食品等)；3.注意事项。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam，
I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student, studying in New Zealand. I’m writing to
Sincerely Yours，
Li Hua
1．审题
提纲作文的关键就是审好题，审题时应做到三定：①定体裁；②定人称；③定时态。
如本文为书信，是高考经常考查的类型，属于应用文；人称以第一人称为主；时态主要用一般现在时。
2．谋篇
提纲作文虽然有简要的提纲，但只是对文章的提示和概括，我们在谋篇时要仔细研读题目信息，对提纲进行归纳整合，并适度拓展。
如本文首先要作自我介绍，并说明写信的目的；然后向旅行社详细询问相关的旅行信息；最后希望对方能早日答复。
[学增分亮点]
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[满分范文]
Dear Sir or Madam，
①I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student, studying in New Zealand. ②I’m writing to ask for information about your agency’s New Zealand’s travel for the coming winter vacation.
③My friend and I plan to travel in the country. ④Could you tell me the departure time and traveling routes? ⑤As we know, New Zealand is famous for its beautiful scenery and places of interest and I want to know more details about these. ⑥Besides, I am interested in the local food there. ⑦How much do I have to pay for the travel? ⑧At length, are there other things I should be aware of?
⑨I would be grateful to receive a reply at your earliest convenience.
Sincerely Yours，
Li Hua
[满分缘由]
1．结构布局
本文可分为三段：
第一段：首先作自我介绍，并说明写信的目的是询问在新西兰旅行的信息；
第二段：向旅行社详细询问相关的旅行信息，如旅游景点和当地特色食品等；
第三段：希望对方早日回信。
2．亮点词汇
ask for, be famous for, places of interest, be interested in, at length, grateful, at one’s earliest convenience
3．亮点句式
第①句包含现在分词短语作定语；
第⑤句包含as引导的定语从句；
第⑧句包含定语从句，且引导词that省略。
[句式改写]
1．用it作形式主语改写句⑤
It_is_known_to_us_all_that_New_Zealand_is_famous_for_its_beautiful_scenery_and_places_of_interest_and_I_want_to_know_more_details_about_these.
2．用I’d appreciate it if ...改写句⑨
I’d_appreciate_it_if_you_can_give_me_a_reply_at_your_earliest_convenience.
[写满分作文]
(2016·洛阳高三一模)假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack来信说，他暑假后将到北京大学留学。请你根据以下内容给他写一封回信，告知相关情况。
1．简单介绍北京大学；
2．生活便利，居民友善；
3．留学期间愿意提供任何帮助。
注意：词数100左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
[要求]
请用定语从句、分词短语、被动语态、不定式、状语从句、it作形式主语、省略完成作文。
Dear Jack，
I glad to know that you will come to China for further study. Now let me tell you what you are concerned with.
I’m looking forward to meeting you in Beijing.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
参考范文：
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to know that you will come to China for further study. Now let me tell you what you are concerned with.
As is known to us, Beijing University is one of the top universities in China, which is famous for its excellent teaching in art and culture. Studying there, you are sure to get improved in every aspect. This is the first time for you to live in a foreign country alone, but yon don’t need to worry about the life there, because it is located in the business center of Beijing. Therefore, it is extremely convenient for you to live there. Besides, most people in Beijing are both kind and hospitable to foreigners.
I’d like to help you find a proper host family nearby the university if necessary.
I’m looking forward to meeting you in Beijing.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua