浙江省2017高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删减或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
例如：
It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily I was
the
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completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around
8 p.m. in Friday evening.
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Last Sunday afternoon, I went to the zoo with Lily. There was lots of people there. I found
a girl cry in the zoo. She was lost and she can’t find her mother. We decided to help her. I try my
best find the broadcasting station in the zoo. On the same time Lily played with her and looked
after her careful there. The little girl stopped crying and played with Lily. At last his mother
came. That made me feel very happily. I thought I really did a good thing. If everyone helps with
each other, the world will become more beautiful.
第二节：书面表达
高一（4）班学生，请根据下列材料写一篇报告，介绍有关调查情况，并发表自己的意见。
1．2．1．2． 注意：不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥。词数在120左右。
Recently I have made an investigation on whether money is the source of happiness.
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第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
there was 改成there are
cry改成crying， find sb. doing sth.意思是“看见某人正在做某事”
can’t改为couldn’t. 短文上下文都是一般过去时
try改为tried
find前加 to。try one’s best to do sth.
on the same time改成at the same time.
careful改成carefully，副词修饰动词looked after.
his mother 改成her mother.
happily改成happy,是系表结构。
with划掉。help each other意思是“互相帮助”
Recently I have made an investigation on whether money is the source of happiness. The students have different opinions.
Some students think that money is the source of happiness. Money is important and we can use money to solve any problem. Without it, we can do nothing. Besides, it enables us to live a comfortable life.
Others, however, are against it. In their opinion, money doesn’t mean everything. We can buy happiness with money. If someone focuses too much attention on making money, in time he will lose his healthy, friendship and even love.
To be honest, I think we should not regard money as everything. Money is just a tool that can help us solve problems. What we should do is to use it properly. In this way, all of us can lead a happier life.