选 修 8
Units 3~
写作进行时——开放类作文
[技巧点拨]
1.开放类作文包括开放和半开放两种。它要求考生根据一定的材料(包括图、文或图文结合)进行写作,这样既限制了考生随心所欲的思维,又给予考生适当的发挥空间。这种命题方式能较好地考查考生的语言组织能力、书面表达能力以及思维能力。
2.开放类作文试题的要求:
(1)文章扣题:首先要理解文章的主题,在表述中围绕主题展开叙述,突出主题,避免离题。
(2)思维活跃:试题为考生提供了广阔的思维空间,要求考生根据主题选取合适的材料组织文章。
(3)内容积极:内容要点要以乐观向上、积极的态度进行表达。
(4)逻辑清楚:表达内容在突出主题的基础上要按照一定的逻辑顺序,使文章内容清晰,流畅。
[习作点评]
◆当前私家车在你们城市发展势头迅猛,它们带来许多便利的同时,也带来了一些弊端。上个月你们班就“私家车迅速发展的利与弊”进行了激烈的讨论,请根据下面提供的内容,客观介绍讨论的情况,并谈谈你自己的看法。
注意:1.对所给内容,不要简单翻译,要有适当发挥。
2.参考词汇:消耗consume(vt.);尾气the waste gas
However,
besides
the
advantages
mentioned
above,
there also exists some disadvantages. [there be句型单复数用错,应用exist。]Cars consume too much energy, and the waste gas from cars pollutes the environment. What's worse, there are not enough roads and traffic jams occur in the rush hours. Apart from that, people find it difficult to park their cars due to the lack of parking lots.
I strongly recommend the number of private cars should be limited and public bus service should be improved. The government should also take measures to reduce pollution.
[跟踪演练]
1 (2011·安徽)
某校英文报开辟了一个专栏:Experience。本期话题是如何解决学习中遇到的困难。请你以“My Approach to Difficulties in Learning”为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈自己的一些做法。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.短文中不能出现本人相关信息。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考范文:
My Approach to Difficulties in Learning
As high school students, we run into one difficulty after another in the process of learning.Everyone has their own way to deal with them.Here I would like to share mine.
When I am faced with a difficulty, I usually choose to refer to relevant learning materials or Web pages.In this way, I can not only work it out but also improve my ability to overcome problems all by myself.
However, when it is something beyond my competence, I turn to my classmates or teachers for help.Sometimes I also ask my parents for advice.As a result, I have made steady progress in my studies.
2 (2011·辽宁)
假定你是李华,将于今年七月从新星外语学校毕业。你从报纸上得知B&B公司要招聘一名英文秘书,你很感兴趣。请给该公司写一封求职信,包括下列要点:
1.年龄;
2.学习情况及英语水平;
3.兴趣和特长;
4.性格特点。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。
June 8
Dear Sir/Madam,
I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
参考范文:
June 8
Dear_Sir/Madam,
I_learned_from_the_newspaper_that_your_company_needs_an_English_secretary. I'm really interested in this position and hope I can work for you.
I'm 18 years old and will be graduating from Xinxing Foreign Languages School this July. I'm an excellent student, among the top 5 in my class of 50 students.
I'm good at English, especially spoken English. I often use the computer and I type very fast. In my spare time, I read a lot. Poems are my favorite. I enjoy music very much too. Being an active young person, I like sports and outdoor activities. Besides, I'm easy to get along with and I like to make friends.
I'm_looking_forward_to_your_reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
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