2015高考英语：短文改错练习（3）及答案解析
【英语卷(解析)·2015届河南省顶级名校高三入学定位考试（201708）】A
Once, a man got on a bus to New York. Because he did not want to pay, so he hid in the toilet. But a passenger saw her. She tapped the person in front of her on the shoulder and say, “There’s a bum in toilet. Tell the bus driver.” The message was passing on from person to person. But somewhere along the way, it was changed. The bus driver told that there was a bomb in the toilet. He immediate stopped the bus and telephoned the police. When the police came, they told the passengers to get off the bus or stay far away. Then they closed the highway. As a result, a traffic jam of 15 mile long was soon caused. In the help of a dog, the police searched for two hours. Of course they found no tomb.
【答案】【知识点】E1 短文改错记叙文
【思路点拨】该题重点考查基础知识的应用，注意名词单复数，动词人称，形容词和副词的变化，时态、语态等基础知识。
【答案解析】
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77. her→him 前文讲述的a man，故此处用him。
78. say→said 并列的谓语动词应用同样的时态，此句前谓语动词用过去时，此处也应用过去时，故say改为said。
79. toilet前加the 此处toilet是双方都明白的，故用定冠词the修饰。
80.passing→passed
句中的主语message为pass的动作承受者，故passing改为passed。
81. was told
tell后跟双宾的及物动词，tell sb that-clause，tell后无间接宾语，故用被动语态。
82.immediate→immediately。副词修饰动词stopped，故immediate改为immediately。
83.or→and。并列的不定式，表示肯定含义用and连接。
84. mile→miles 15修饰mile，故应用复数形式。
85. in→with。 在某人的帮助之下with one’s help或者with the help of sb。
【英语卷(解析)·2015届河北省唐山市高三9月模拟考试（201709）WORD版】
第一节短文改错（共10小题：每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It was a year ago when Joshua got a bike for Christmas, but he rode it every day． One morning, he suddenly found the bike gone． Ran to his front yard, he saw
a man loading it into his car． He shouted, but the man drive off． As a devoted Christian, he told his dad he real forgave the thief． What's more, he wanted the thief know he was forgiven． So the next day, he posted the message on a poster-board and put it in the front yard． "To the person who stole my bike: You hurt my feeling． But I am a Christian and I forgive him!" When he left for home the next morning, at the end of the driveway, the bike was back with new brakes．
【文章综述】本文讲述一个善良的人用爱心感动盗贼的故事
【答案解析】
when –that
考查强调句。句意：一年前因为圣诞节周华得了一辆自行车。强调一年前。
but—and
考查连词。句意：一年前因为圣诞节周华得了一辆自行，并且每天都骑着它。两个句子之间是并列关系。
Ran—Running
考查非谓语动词。句意：他跑到前院，看到一个男人正在把他的自行车装到他的车上。两个句子共用一个主语，he与run之间是主动关系。
drive—drove
考查动词的时态。句意：他叫喊但那个男人开车跑了。But连接的两个句子时态保持一致。
real---really
考查副词 句意：作为一个虔诚的基督徒，他告诉父亲他真的原谅了那个小偷。
the thief后面加to 考查动词用法。Want sb to do 想让某人做某事。
the message—a
考查冠词。句意：因此第二天，他前院的海报上写一个短信；因为第一次提到故用a.
feeling---feelings 考查名词。句意：你伤害我的感情。Feelings表示感情。
him—you
考查代词。句意：但我是个基督徒，我原谅你。
left for 去掉for
考查动词。句意：当他第二天早上离开家时。Leave A for B 离开A地去B地。
短文改错
I was a high school student then, from low-income
76. _______
family. So I have to work to support my family. My
77. __________
first one job was to clean tables in a small restaurant. 78. __________
I still remember going there early and felt anxious about 79. __________
the new world. I worked harder because I was afraid of
80. __________
losing the job. At night, I was sometimes very tired to do 81. __________
my homework. And I came to understand that was not 82. __________
easy to earn money, and knowledge could change 83. __________
my life. So what I learned from the job, in a hard 84. __________
way, was much more important as what I earned.
85. __________
【参考答案】
I was a high school student then, from∧ low-income
76. ____a______
family. So I have to work to support my family. My
77. ___had ____
first one job was to clean tables in a small restaurant. 78. ____去掉one___
I still remember going there early and felt anxious about 79. ____feeling______
the new world. I worked harder because I was afraid of
80. ___hard_______
losing the job. At night, I was sometimes very tired to do 81. ____too______
my homework. And I came to understand that∧ was not 82. ____it______
easy to earn money, and∧ knowledge could change 83. ___that ____
my life. So what I learned from the job, in a hard 84. ____√______
way, was much more important as what I earned. 85. ___than____
短文改错
My cousin Xiao Hong and I went on trip to my uncle’s
76. _____________
last Sunday. We were riding along a hillside then suddenly
77. _____________
some big stones were rolled down and knocked us off our bikes.
78. _________
Xiao Hong’s legs got serious hurt and so did mine. We
79. _____________
couldn’t move a bit. Fortunately, I saw some farmers ahead.
80. ____________
Waving our hand, we cried for help like crazy. On hearing
81. ____________
us, they run to the spot as fast as they could. Thanks to
82___________
their help, we were all sent to a nearby hospital and received
83. ____________
medical treatment in time. Although we do not know about their
84. ________
names, we fell they like our dear big brothers and sisters.
85. _______
【参考答案】76.on︿ a
77. then →when
78 were去掉
79 serious → seriously
80.正确
81. hand→hands
82.run→ran
83.all→both
84.about 去掉
85.they︿are
One day, I was cooking in the kitchen as 76．_______________
the telephone rang. I went to answer immediately. 77．_______________
She was my close friend, Lisa. When we were talking 78．_______________
on a phone, the fire alarm sounded. I ran back to the 79．_______________
kitchen. The room full of smoke and beef was badly 80．_______________
burnt. I quickly turned off the gas, opening all the
81．_______________
windows, and then went out of the house. With my 82．_______________
surprise, two fire engines were outside my house. I 83．_______________
was rather worried. I told about the firemen that it
84．_______________
was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke. 85．_______________
76．as→When
77．answer后加it 78．She→It
79．a→the
80． room后加was
81．opening→opened
82．With→To
83．√
84．去掉about
85．which→that
J）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：在答题卡短文上把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在答题卡短文的缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在答题卡短文错的词下划一横线，并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。
George,
It's been a week after we left your family and we are now
76._______
back home. Thank you very much for showing them around
77.______
your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After
78._______
we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington D.C.,
79._______
where we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond
80._______
of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying
81．________
another couple of day. However, my father had to return to
82.________
work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It
83．________
was really a nice experience. If you'd like to make trip to
84._______
our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide.
85._______
Yours,
Mike
【参考答案】
76.after---since
77.them---us
78.for---with
79.正确
80.去掉much
81.staying---stay
82.day----days
83.fly---flew
84.trip前a
85.better----more
(2017·甘肃省部分学校第二次联考)
I'm a senior student from China, aging seventeen. While surfing the Internet, I have found that your organization will hold a summer camp in Singapore. With greatly interest, I'd like to apply for them. I'm an outgoing girl who like communicating with others. I could speak English well. My written English is excellent, either. I wish to join in the activities. For one thing, I'm willing to introduce China to other students from all over world; for another, I expect to learn from more about other countries. In addition, I'd like to make friend. The chance is so precious as I'm really looking forward to your approval.
答案：
I'm a senior student from China,
seventeen. While surfing the Internet, I have found that your organization will hold a summer camp in Singapore. With
interest, I'd like to apply for . I'm an outgoing girl who
communicating with others. I
speak English well. My written English is excellent, . I wish to join in the activities. For one thing, I'm willing to introduce China to other students from all over
world; for another, I expect to learn
more about other countries. In addition, I'd like to make . The chance is so precious
I'm really looking forward to your approval.
短文改错
I still remember my middle school life in Tianjin yet . I was then
76.
in a school for students from Tibet . As we were all left home
77.
at early age , we met lots of problems in our daily life . We
78.
had to do the washing , cleaning and shopping by us . However ,
79.
we seldom felt lonely or helplessly . We enjoyed our happy life .
80.
At weekends , we would play basketball , swimming in the pool
81.
or go for a picnic . We were living in a big family . We treat
82.
each other as brothers and sisters . If any one of us had any
83.
difficulty in our life and study , the other would help him out .
84.
It has been five years when we graduated , but those memories
85.
are as sweet as ever before .
【参考答案】
I still remember my middle school life in Tianjin yet . I was then
76.
yet
in a school for students from Tibet . As we were all left home
77.
were
at ∧early age , we met lots of problems in our daily life . We
78.
an
had to do the washing , cleaning and shopping by us . However ,
79.
ourselves
we seldom felt lonely or helplessly . We enjoyed our happy life .
80.
helpless
At weekends , we would play basketball , swimming in the pool
81.
swim
or go for a picnic . We were living in a big family . We treat
82.
treated
each other as brothers and sisters . If any one of us had any
83.
√
difficulty in our life and study , the other would help him out .
84.
others
It has been five years when we graduated , but those memories
85.
since
are as sweet as ever before .
短文改错
Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play. All over 76. _______
the world men and woman , boys and girls enjoy sports . Since 77. _______
long ago , many adults and children called their friends together 78. _______
to spend hours , even days play games . One of the reasons why people
79. _______
like to play is that sports help them to live happily . In other words,
80. _______
they help to keep people strong and feel good . When people are 81. _______
playing games, they move a lot. That is how sports are good activities 82. _______
for their health .Having fun with their friends make them happy.
83. _______
Many people enjoy sports by watching the others play. In American 84. _______
big cities, thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games. 85. _______
【参考答案】
76. and －but
77. woman－women
78.
called前加had 79. play- playing
80． 正确
81. feel-feeling
82. how-why
83. make-makes
84.去掉the
85. sell-buy